how many times can a chick get punched in the face
before her make-up smears?
If there was a category for adolescent testosterone, I'd have given you a 10.
She was very well draw, but the thugs...well obviously you're not as passionate about drawing guys. I had to rate you lower on that lack of consistency. It shows potential, but you need to be able to sustain the creative energy throughout the animation -- which includes spending the time to draw the males with as much heart as you draw the femmes. If you can accomplish that, and develop a story that is more than an excuse for violence, then you might be on to something.
Oh, and did I mention that I thought the violence was just a tad over-the-top?