hmm
the first bit was ok but the fighting was weak; first shes a stupid animal and then suddenly she turnes into a mean fighting machine...
Reviews for "LR: Prelude"
Meh...
I thought this was going to be better, but I found it lacking in several areas. First of all, the graphics are a bit too sloppy. You have relativley static, small-movement FBF with minimal detail-- not good.
Secondly, I see no real plot here. Yes, it's the first episode, but you could have done better than "stereotypical thugs go up to some chick who keeps maps in her shirts, who proceeds to beat the crap out of all of them".... Well, alright, that wasn't the main thing considering how stereotypical EVERYTHING is, but the detail that concerns me most is the crappy dialogue. I mean seriously. That is some CRAPPY dialogue. Any situation, no matter how sterotypical or boring, can be made awesome with well-written dialogue. Work on the script a bit. And the art. And the sound. It could have been much higher quality.
I look forward to improved work in the future.
I dont get it..
The point? I mean a girl wich meets on some thugs and kills em.. er... AT LEAST GET A POINT IN THE MOVIE?!
subtitles
really good animation..... but the music was too loud, or the talking was too quiet
she was too stupid but it was cool
lol it was kinda dumb but ilikedit