not bad
the beat was great and it had a perfect mood to fit the lyrics, kinda reminded me of some Lupe Fiasco stuff.
the big issue is the vocals *sorry*
but, you should probably get a better studio setting for recording, and probably practice breathing timing and toss a bit of post processing on the vocal tracks
great potential though
Honestly, the studio setting was not at fault here. I have a fairly decent set up. What was at fault was how far from the mic I stood, and my lack of patience in finding the right voice
Need more polishing but it has shape already.
I don't like rap music because of they're content and the way their makers represented it into the public. almost all of the rap music I heard is all about hatred, anger, racism and rebellion.
Music is very influential especially to kids nowadays especially rap music. Everyday the kids will listen to them and got influenced by it. I think it will be better if they got something to listen to that has meaning and can be a better influence for them like what you did in this track.
The whole idea is there and it has shape already. However, the vocals need some polishing. It doesn't sit well in the track and it is poorly executed.
All of the elements of the track are absolutely fine except for the vocal part.
Haha, the vocals do indeed need more work
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The Ideea was good
But not really my style
Anyway i give you an 7/10 for trying
thanks for the review
Good idea; bad execution
So anyway, I really hate rap more than life itself. Seriously if rap were the only thing left in the world I would kill myself. Still though, I went ahead and listened to your song (which is saying something), and it wasn't bad. At least you had a story to it instead of just singing about how you always got the best bitch and the mother fucking best car and what not. That makes my ears bleed. Yes, at least you had a meaning to it. The only problem is it did not sound like you were into it voice wise. Also it sounded a bit light. So, you still did a lot better than I had expected from a rap song, and I hope you keep it up. Peace,
PO
Thanks, glad you could at least give it a chance. I too hate constantly hearing the same drivel that's all over the radio, so I like to mix it up. My voice wasn't up to par with this I acknowledge, that is something I am still learning.
Thanks for the review
welll
i think ur right ur lyrics is tight but ur voice aint, try calming down speak with the bass in ur voice or summin i dnt know try it out see wut happens or maybe use the voice changer like t pain or summin i dnt know but ur white people can rap but just gotta find da right tone of voice but its tight n the beat is fire
Thanks dude. As I've said, I think I'm starting to get the hang of it with some tracks I'm working on