Good work
I liked it. I rarely like school projects posted up on NG because they're usually too boring, but this one is good. It was well done. Good job.
Reviews for "Persia Destroyed"
PersianPower responds:
Thankyou for you review and opinion.
Interesting
That was nice. A bit too much reading, and your own drawings were a little amateur, but everything still looked very nice and the music was an excellent choice.
The world is ironic, isn't it? I like your unbiased view on things.
PersianPower responds:
Thankyou very much, if this weren't a little school project and actually some big flash animation, I would have spent more then 15 minutes on the drawings. Thankyou very much.
well
.....no....that can't be possible...because i am the prince of persia
j/k..it was good..full of pictures and stuff..to be honest i don't like those too much but if that's your thing the run with it
PersianPower responds:
Ok, thanks lol. No, but I am the Prince Of Persia.
Tried something new?
Not bad, however, review-wise, please read the following: You may want to consider some sort of voice over, instead of the text. Very factual, but people and reading don't go together too well, even if its for a class. Try a different song for the backgrpund music, my suggestion would be anything indian, check on limewire for an indian instrumental, if you don't have one. Keep up the good work, otherwise. Hope this was for a project. If it is, you may want to learn PowerPoint, it will convey the text in a more appropriate means.
PersianPower responds:
Alright, I will remember what you told me for the next animation I make.
It's ok, but I think your info is wrong
It's an ok flash, the first historically based one I've seen...but, I think your info is wrong. Sorry to be a nitpicker, but the Persian Empire was destroyed by Alexander the Great, and his was split up into pieces, maybe you meant the area, not the Empire. Like the pics though!
PersianPower responds:
I think your info is wrong, it should say Alexander the Destroyer. What did he do that was so great? He also contributed to the destruction of Persia.