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It was good, before you present it in class you have a few words misspelled if you feel like correcting them. Were is for where a couple of times in the beginning, towards the end way to many Persians were killed should be too. And somewhere thier should be their. And I'm not exactly sure if the last frame of the movie is entirely correct, if I remember correctly from last year most of the Catholic crusades were horrible failures and only 3 or 4 out of 13 were deemed successful. Anyways good flash