Quite well done
I wouldn't be surprised if you got a really good mark for this. There are only two things I would suggest to make it better. 1) Add buttons so that slower readers can read the entire page before it advances to the next one. 2) Improve the animation. Otherwise it was a very good flash. Good luck.
1.I want the animation to keep up with the music 2.I think this is good enough for a school project, do you want me to add more frames to stuff like when the Persian was running or something?
Fair
I personally don't like the fact that you chose sides, this is not a good choice and will lower your mark. Also I didn't like your spelling mistakes , using the same song as the submission on Albinoblacksheep and having it almost as the submission but instead of having it as a historic edge.
Please, try to have more originality. Besides that, I thought it was a informative flash.
Just watch out for taking sides and keeping in original
I have never seen or heard of Albinoblacksheep, I fixed my spelling mistakes and will upload it soon, and I really didn't take sides if you look at it. I am not comparing Arab Conquerers to Nazis in this sentence, but when people tell the story of WWII don't they take the side of teh Alles, yes they do because the Allies were the good guys.
Good work
I liked it. I rarely like school projects posted up on NG because they're usually too boring, but this one is good. It was well done. Good job.
Thankyou for you review and opinion.
Good movie, I agree on your opinion.
I am Persian my self....or...what you call half Persian. I'm proud of it and stuff. And I know about the Arabic and Hellenic (greek) invasions in Persia....
No, really good job, at least this movie has some meaning to it!
:) Big thumb for you!
Agreeable viewpoint
I liked it, you did your homework, unlike alexander back there- Alexanderos didn't destroy the persian empire, he merely warmed the throne for a fraction of the empire's existence. Although likewise, to be fair, does that not mean he wasn't truly the destroyer? Anyway, I lose track, I would like to see more historical flash on newgrounds like this, I give you a 7.