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The Hanging (Storyline) Collab

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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 06:49:51


At 2/4/08 08:26 PM, AAF wrote: how long do u have our parts to be ?

wow .. that was such the worst sentence ever...

How long do you want our part to be ?


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 12:31:51


here my one please say its good and im in because iv never been ina collab
http://www.swfup.com/file/120844

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 14:50:08


soory here the better one i hope u lick it
http://www.swfup.com/file/120961

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 17:19:29


aehmm....


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 18:20:55


At 2/5/08 02:50 PM, ArjunS wrote: soory here the better one i hope u lick it
http://www.swfup.com/file/120961

I didn't lick it, I kept my tongue in my mouth =p

Honestly, it isn't good. I'm sorry to be so blunt about it, but that's the fact of the matter. Work on your animating and drawing techniques a bit more. Hope you get better at it and will be able to make great animations, but for now, I won't be using your part.

AAF, the parts can be as long as you want them to be, or as short. Preferably, it will be long enough for people to understand what in the world is going on--I'd say about 15+ seconds. I don't care if it's really long, just as long as it's not boring.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 18:25:18


nah, it'll be 3 parts, of about 8 seconds each.

and is it ok if it includes alcohol? :D


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 19:18:33


At 2/5/08 06:25 PM, AAF wrote: nah, it'll be 3 parts, of about 8 seconds each.

and is it ok if it includes alcohol? :D

Probably--in what kind of context? If you don't want everyone to know, just PM me about it. It would probably be okay, I just don't want it to be so much that I have to include "adult themes" in the rating.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-05 21:21:00


The Hanging Collab

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Update: Added a part :D

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-06 03:08:48


why are u so mean ever one alway be's mean to me now your of them

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-06 07:27:38


The main idea is a guy that drink a whole bottle, then it cut, then next part he shakes and pukes (...) then it cuts and next part theres something even more funny but I dont want to reveal it now :D


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-06 16:57:08


At 2/6/08 07:27 AM, AAF wrote: The main idea is a guy that drink a whole bottle, then it cut, then next part he shakes and pukes (...) then it cuts and next part theres something even more funny but I dont want to reveal it now :D

You'll have to reveal it, just PM me. Drinking was a subject that I wanted to aviod for the most part, but would be willing to allow if the part was good enough. Now you talk about the guy puking? That's gross >_>. PM me the funny ending and I'll let you know if it's worth it.

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every1 h8s me and b's meeen to me and now ur 1 of them

(or something like that)

I wasn't mean to you at all, I was stating a fact, and trying to do it mercifully.

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Update! The Hanging Collab

Well, at least, I THINK there's an update. If not, you can look at something I made but didn't tell you about--the right-click menu! Try it out!

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-06 23:10:24


I wouldn't mind joining in if that's alright

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-07 23:53:40


At 2/6/08 11:10 PM, Cerion wrote: I wouldn't mind joining in if that's alright

If you can animate well, YOU'RE IN!

Welcome :D

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-08 22:55:47


Looks great so far to me, i see youve added a car crash sound effect on my part!

you think the darkness on one side made it a bit more obvious?


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-09 17:51:44


Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-09 21:40:31


you know what? this sounds like a cool collab, i think ill submit something to it :P,

just assign me a part of the story to continue!

as long as i can be spontanious and random


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-10 13:31:51


The fridge in my second animation was supposed to say FRIDGE on it. Did you take it off on purpose? Or is it because I used a font you don't have? If so, I'll break it apart and send the fla. to you again. Also, everything looks AWESOME. (Just FYI.)


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-11 20:28:11


SHOQ:

Yep, the darkness was a nice addition. I also added the sound effect, and I made the smoke fade out better.

Cerion:

Yeah, those are pretty good. They are somewhat slow, if they were meant to actually go in the collab, but as far as animation and graphics, they are decent enough :)

Just tie each part in, and make them more fast-paced, if those are what you want in the collab. It doesn't make any sense between the Ninja, then suddenly there's a pirate in part 2. Maybe Parts 1 and 2 should be all one part.

Dante:

You make both the first and second (and third, etc) part to your animation--you continue something that you start yourself.

Trekopep:

Yeah, I noticed in the .fla that it said fridge, but it vanishes when I publish. I'll see if I can work some magic and make it appear. Glad you like it, I can't wait to launch.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-11 21:16:27


Well if you look closely you can see the ninja zip past the drunken pirate twice but I could easily make some changes if you think I need to.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-11 22:08:58


An updated version of my parts if it'll help any

Part 1:
http://www.swfup.com/file/127013

Part2:
http://www.swfup.com/file/127016

Part3:
http://www.swfup.com/file/127017

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-11 23:10:45


At 2/11/08 09:16 PM, Cerion wrote: Well if you look closely you can see the ninja zip past the drunken pirate twice but I could easily make some changes if you think I need to.

He's drunk? Oh. Maybe make him sway a bit, I didn't realize that he was hiccuping and drunk.

Also, how does this end? There should be an end to the set, not leave them hanging forever--is the end the destruction of the pirate ship?

Like I said, the animation is good, but I'm not sure about the execution of the storyline. Oh, or the drunken pirate--that shouldn't be that hard to update :)

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-12 11:26:20


im joining if i can use madness.


if your read this scentence, you are not cool.

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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-12 14:17:57


here is my part. the something else part is not supposed to be in the collab.


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-12 16:58:48


I wouldn't usually mind madness, if done well, but it's not done well enough, IMO. You can't really tell what's happening, and the parts are too short--maybe combine a couploe parts together. Also, the graphics and animation weren't well-done either: the part with the hammer hitting the, uh, red blob. Finally, I can't have the music in there, because I already have music playing throughout.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-12 17:03:30


At 1/4/08 01:10 PM, ShirkDeio wrote:
At 1/4/08 01:07 PM, patu1 wrote: congratulations you just got to the first place of the stupid collab ideas
let's all hope that one of the modes lock this...
why do you think the viewer would remember what happened in the first part with so many short ones ha ? and like Eric cartman said you are hella stupid
I actually checked with a mod before I posted this, as well as several people who have done plenty of collabs--they all said it was good. Sorry you didn't like the idea, though. Good luck with your collabs or submissions :)

Owned.... Why do people do this? It kills collab threads with pointless arguements. Wasting time, energey and thread pages. GRRRRRRRR. Ill join lol.

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-12 17:28:51


At 2/12/08 05:03 PM, Strik3Mast3r wrote: Owned.... Why do people do this? It kills collab threads with pointless arguements. Wasting time, energey and thread pages. GRRRRRRRR. Ill join lol.

Yeah, he didn't know what he was talking about =p

Can't wait to see your part :D

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-15 15:47:30


How goes it?

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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-15 18:56:38


May I suggest adding a quality changing option in the right-click menu?


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Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-15 23:23:35


At 2/15/08 06:56 PM, trekopep wrote: May I suggest adding a quality changing option in the right-click menu?

Certainly, I'll add it ASAP. Thanks for the input!

Response to The Hanging (Storyline) Collab 2008-02-16 20:18:09


I added the quality control, below is what I have so far. Also, I will be adding AAF's part soon.

The Hanging Collab