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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-21 22:06:30


At 9/21/08 09:31 PM, Fremen wrote:
At 9/21/08 07:34 PM, Rocker23220 wrote: RP
Sounds good.

I'll whip up a response sometime. Sometime soon.

The decision of making him a descendant of Rock Lee came to me in a chain of stuff. At first, I had no idea what to do. Then you mentioned making him a drunk, so then I started coming up with ideas.

Then you mentioned making him related to an older character, and G4 was showing "The Master of Drunken Fighting" with Jackie Chan. Everything else just seemed to fall into place. Haha.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-21 22:21:48


Chapter 7: The Fated Meeting

Part 1

Takada stood there ready to answer him when suddenly, an insanely bright light flashed. Everyone stood paralyzed, and the world was so bright that no one could see anything for nearly 10 seconds. Takada heard two ninja's get killed and another one got kicked through a wall. When the lights receded Takada had a cloth pressed to his face and he blacked out less than a moment later.

He woke some time later, in some sort of underground lair (not too surprising since most of Nappoko is underground...). The room was pitch black and he could feel the air pressure pushing in on him. It felt extremely dense, like he was underwater, but could breath.

The door opened directly in front of Takada. He was in some sort of glass cage. The whole room was tinted blue, and it was then, he realized that he was floating in some sort of liquid. His mouth was hooked up to a respirator. The air he breathed was pure and smelled like oxygen. The man that opened the door walked in and took some notes on Takada. He wore a white lab coat with the Shiroinin Clan symbol on it (Shinji's clan).

Takada then realized where he was. His clan had three secret hideouts/headquarters. One was in Konoha, and the other two were secret. This one must be in Nappoko. Sometimes it was nice to be born into a good family.

He saw the scientist push a button on the wall. The lights turned on and Takada saw the room. Rinn was in the tank next to him, and another tank was empty on his right. There was a door in front of him, and a lab bench next to it. There were single eyes in jars along one wall and some other body parts. He then felt the liquid in his tank receding. He fell to the bottom, completely numb.

The glass lifted up, and he eventually was able to stand. The scientist looked at him condescendingly.

Scientist: Hi Takada. Thanks for tracking down Shinji. He owed us some money. We were able to extract his assets and him after that little scuffle you two had. Your friend is almost down healing. His bioplasm was hard to produce since his genes are part plant, but we did it before he dies on us. You're lucky we were there. What were you doing there anyways?

Takada: We were sent by the Hokage to infiltrate his organization. Apparently he knew you guys were going to attack.

Scientist: Haha, that's classic planning by him. The Hokage is truly genius. He is able to infer much from our yearly reports. Well, we got Shinji's body and we analyzed his Kekkai Genkai disabling technique. Apparently, he just sends a very short burst of chakra through one's systems, disabling the chakra to reach the Kekkai Genkai nerve. Only newer Kekkai Genkai have such distinguished nerves, so you would've been safe from that.

Takada noticed that Rinn was out of his tank and standing at this point.

Rinn: What the fuck happened? My jaw is so sore...

He rubbed his jaw and sat down on a chair. The scientist offered a chair to Takada, but he refused.

Takada: I want my clothes.

Scientist: They were destroyed in the fight we had with Shinji. We'll make you some more advanced ones. The only thing that survived were some seeds in a special bag that belonged to your partner.

Rinn: Thank god.

He took the seeds off the lab bench and summoned his bandages back. He slowly put them on as the scientist explained the clothes being made for Takada and Rinn.

Scientist: For you Takada, we're making kunai resistant, camouflage white robes. They'll blend in easier when you use techniques, and are equipped with some useful scrolls and weapons that you are used to using, as well as ultralight kunai and shuriken. For you, Rinn, we're developing some very special clothes. These are chakra enabled, and since you are constantly absorbing energy from your surroundings, we decided to amplify that. Your powers work better when you receive more light and heat energy. We made clothes that look like your old ones, but with special chakra enabled nanotechnology. Basically, they're lighter, stronger, and will amplify your Kekkai Genkai. We're pouring tons of money in these, so we expect both of you to give us your prize money in full after the tournament.

Rinn: When are they gonna be ready?

Scientist: Two weeks. Until then, you two should train with our resident sensei. He's pretty good.

Part 2

Tai woke up at dawn, and saw Lee already making breakfast. After they both ate and got ready, Lee threw him his pack, and put his own on.

Lee: I owe some people some stuff in Nappoko, so we'll go there to train. They have pretty good supplies for our training.

Lee started walking and Tai followed. For two days straight, with no stops, they walked. By the end, Tai was exhausted.

Tai: Are we there yet?

Lee stomped on the ground.

Lee: Not yet.

This continued for hours until Lee apparently found the perfect place to stop. He did so, stomped one time to make sure, and took out a scroll. He read something, and then told Tai to come stand next to him. Before they knew it, they were shooting underground in some sort of elevator. When they got out, they found themselves in a completely white, small, underground Lobby. It had some sort of weird clan symbol on it, and a ninja greeted them.

Lee: Take us to Genju Sensei. I have some business to take care of.

Ninja: Of course, Lee-sama.

And the ninja led them away.

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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-21 23:01:25


Whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Haha. So...

what now?

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-21 23:35:40


At 9/21/08 11:01 PM, Rocker23220 wrote: Whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Haha. So...

what now?

Oh, I've got more. I'll type it up tomorrow. hehe.


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 01:10:57


At 9/21/08 11:35 PM, Fremen wrote:
At 9/21/08 11:01 PM, Rocker23220 wrote: Whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Haha. So...

what now?
Oh, I've got more. I'll type it up tomorrow. hehe.

Haha. Can't wait.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 01:34:25


At 9/21/08 11:35 PM, Fremen wrote:
At 9/21/08 11:01 PM, Rocker23220 wrote: Whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Haha. So...

what now?
Oh, I've got more. I'll type it up tomorrow. hehe.

Excellent.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 08:37:11


This is the best I could make.

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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 09:21:46


At 9/22/08 08:37 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: This is the best I could make.

cool cool

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 14:19:56


At 9/22/08 08:37 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: This is the best I could make.

This is the best I could make.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 15:11:56


At 9/22/08 02:19 PM, Reaperyami wrote:
At 9/22/08 08:37 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: This is the best I could make.
This is the best I could make.

The water effect would be jounin and why would I carry a parasol.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 15:22:27


At 9/22/08 03:11 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote:
At 9/22/08 02:19 PM, Reaperyami wrote:
At 9/22/08 08:37 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: This is the best I could make.
This is the best I could make.
The water effect would be jounin and why would I carry a parasol.

Because it always rains in rain village.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 19:57:24


If SSI doesn't choose the umbrella thing, I think I may take your idea and make that my weapon. I've had a couple of ideas formulating inside my head.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 22:04:21


I think some of you may have already know this but I really do not like Naruto. I made this club when I did but now I'm a member still to flex my creative muscle. I prefer far more mature stuff like Now and Then Here and There.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-22 22:40:22


At 9/22/08 10:04 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: I think some of you may have already know this but I really do not like Naruto. I made this club when I did but now I'm a member still to flex my creative muscle. I prefer far more mature stuff like Now and Then Here and There.

Cool.

I just read the manga since the anime has gone to hell.

I'm going to write the next RP chapter on Wed, so if someone wants to just go on their own and do it, I'm fine with it. I'm just kind of busy with school, sorry guys.


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-23 00:53:59


Same here, I pretty much only read the anime now.

I'm not going to post, since I don't know what's going on, or what's going to happen.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-23 17:57:12


At 9/23/08 12:53 AM, Rocker23220 wrote: Same here, I pretty much only read the anime now.

I'm not going to post, since I don't know what's going on, or what's going to happen.

Alright. I'll try to get something down ASAP.

(which will be sometime tomorrow hopefully).


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-24 19:43:33


It has been a while.

Ch. 1 Introduction

Kamiya: My name is Kamiya Miyasaki. I live in the Rain village, full of lowdown scum among other things. I'm going to change that, and the only way to do that is to become the best. I became a chuunin not that long ago and I have yet to become a jounin. If I'm going to be the best I can't lose to anyone, no matter what.
_____
Kamiya is walking down the street with a bag full of food and medicine, there are beggars and pickpockets. Someone tries to take something of his but he quickly makes them stop.

Kamiya: Next time it's your hand.

The man backed off and Kamiya kept going until he was stopped. A group of thugs was in his way, claiming an overpass as theirs.

Thug 1: If you want to cross this here bridge your going to have to pay up.

Kamiya walked by, giving them no mind.

Thug 2: Hey kid, show a little respect or else.

Kamiya was halfway across the bridge when he heard a whistling. He moved his head in time to avoid a shuriken strike. He quickly transferred himself behind the group and knocked the leader out with a swift strike to the temple.

Thug 3: Cha, you think I'm scared.

Kamiya preformed a quick jutsu and stared directly into the thugs eyes. He began to freak out, he saw his own insides ripped out of his body, and his blood became maggots. He was in searing pain.

The second thug brandished a knife and lunged at Kamiya who moved out the way and with one arm disarmed the thug and knocked him out.

He preceed to freak out the second thug. Eventually he became so delirious he passed out. Kamiya crossed the bridge and didn't look back or say anything.

Kamiya eventually arrived at a little shack far from town. He oppened the door and was greated by a weak voice.

Woman: Hey son, did you get what I needed.
Kamiya: Yes mother. I wasn't able to get the good stuff. Medicine is expensive these days.
Woman: It's all right dear. I just don't want you g\ittle shack far from town. He oppened the door and was greated by a weak voice.

Woman: Hey son, did you get what I needed.
Kamiya: Yes mother. I wasn't able to get the good stuff. Medicine is expensive these days.
Woman: It's all right dear. I just don't want you become a criminal.
Kamiya: You know I'm too good for that mom. I want to help you out, just I want to do it on my own.
Woman: Now son, I never said getting a little help was bad.
Kamiya: I don't like charity.

Kamiya took everything out of the bag and seperated the medicine and the food. He prepared the medicine and gave it to his mother.

Kamiya: There you go.

His mother drank it and gave a little shutter due to the bitter taste.
Kamiya: I'm going to cook dinner. Unfortunataly all I could buy was some rice and beans. Good thing that's my specialty.

Kamiya steamed the rice and put the beans in. He added a few seasons and mixed it all together. He prepared a plate for his mother and they sat down and ate.

Kamiya: Mother, I'm going to make this world a better place, for you.
Mother: I know sweetie, I know.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-24 23:44:41


At 9/24/08 07:43 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: It has been a while.

Ch. 1 Introduction

Kamiya: My name is Kamiya Miyasaki. I live in the Rain village, full of lowdown scum among other things. I'm going to change that, and the only way to do that is to become the best. I became a chuunin not that long ago and I have yet to become a jounin. If I'm going to be the best I can't lose to anyone, no matter what.

Does the Rain village exist in our world?

I think it was converted to the Grass/Rain Nuetral Zone, right guys?

Could you change Rain to Nappoko maybe SSI? It would work just as well, but you'd need to be part of the Rain Firm or something...

Just read up on Reaper's site:

http://www.freewebs.com/reaperyami/index .htm


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-26 10:45:25


Dum de dum dumdum.....

It's like a ghost town in here

*tumbleweed rolls by*

I rest my case. Haha.

How's it coming, Fremen?

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-26 22:34:17


Fremen, if you were 't so anal about your rp it would be done by now. That one I did was made in 30 minutes and the reason Kamiya calls it Rain is because his father called it that as his father before that.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-26 22:48:20


At 9/26/08 10:34 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: Fremen, if you were 't so anal about your rp it would be done by now. That one I did was made in 30 minutes and the reason Kamiya calls it Rain is because his father called it that as his father before that.

I might as well work on the second half of my epilogue....

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-26 23:50:06


Shit.

Sorry guys, my comp. died for a while.

Umm...I'm going to be busy from like 10-5 tomorrow and even more on Sunday.

You guys can RP if you want. I can PM you if you want to hear some of my ideas, but they weren't that great.


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 01:22:09


Whatever happened to freewriting. I propose one of you do a freewrite chapter like one of my full 8000 character ones. They are not even difficult.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 02:01:39


At 9/27/08 01:22 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: Whatever happened to freewriting. I propose one of you do a freewrite chapter like one of my full 8000 character ones. They are not even difficult.

Elaborate, if you will please.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 02:09:36


At 9/27/08 02:01 AM, Rocker23220 wrote:
At 9/27/08 01:22 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: Whatever happened to freewriting. I propose one of you do a freewrite chapter like one of my full 8000 character ones. They are not even difficult.
Elaborate, if you will please.

Just write what comes to your head. As it comes out just type it and you won't know the end until you are done.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 02:38:24


At 9/27/08 02:09 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote:
At 9/27/08 02:01 AM, Rocker23220 wrote:
At 9/27/08 01:22 AM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: Whatever happened to freewriting. I propose one of you do a freewrite chapter like one of my full 8000 character ones. They are not even difficult.
Elaborate, if you will please.
Just write what comes to your head. As it comes out just type it and you won't know the end until you are done.

That's exactly what I do, but Fremen supposedly had more to his RP, but I guess not. I'll type something up tomorrow. You don't like what I write, Fucking bite me.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 02:40:00


Is it our characters, or just anyone? i dont wanna ruin fremen's syoryline, so...

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 14:34:17


Chapter 2: Life or Death
Kamiya was going through his daily rounds and began to walk home. He felt something odd when he was home. He set his bag down just outside his home and pulled out a kunai and peeked through the door. The house was ransacked and there was a letter on the table.

Letter: You humiliated my gang you bastard. Now here is the deal, if you come to the Dancing Crane in the slum district at 3:00 pm with no weapons we will give you your precious mother back.

Kamiya's eyes widen since he didn't even know his mother was gone.

Letter: Of course you have to give in to our demands when you arrive. I don't feel like telling you, oh and I hope you like the gift we left you.

Kamiya looked around but didn't see anything but he smelled something familiar, gunpowder.

Kamiya: A bomb!

Kamiya darted out of the house before he could grab anything important. Once he was outside the house was drenched in fire. He kept the letter in hand and went toward the location.

He arrived at the place it was a casino that had the feeling of the Underground. He was stopped before he could enter but when he showed them the letter they let him through and led him to a lift.

Kamiya: Where is my mother?
Bouncer: Beats me, I'm just following order.

Once they reached the bottom Kamiya walked forward and relized that the ground beneath him was sand. Then lights came on and he saw that he was on an arena.

???: So you came afterall. Welcome to my arena. I am Kouziki. If you want your precious mother back your going to have to beat my arena.
Kamiya: I will accept only if you show me that my mother is okay.
Kouziki: Fine.

Kamiya's mother hobbled out and sat down in a chair and spoke softly.

Mother: Don't do it Kamiya, I don't have that much longer to live anyways.
Kamiya: I don't care mother, I can't let people like him get away with this kind of stuff.
Kouziki: Bwahahaha! It seems that this is a self-righteous child. Well since you accepted, let the first round BEGIN!

3 men stepped forward first. They were armed with one-shot rifles and several assassin weapons.
Thug 1: We were unprepared last time.
Thug 2: You're at a disadvantage now boy.
Thug 3: That trick you pulled on me won't work this time.

The three thugs aimed their rifles at Kamiya but all three shots missed.

Kamiya: Is that all?

Kamiya body transferred behind one the thugs and stole one of his kunai and took him out. The other thugs took their weapons out as well and charged him. Even though Kamiya specialized in Genjutsu he has good enough reflexes to dodge all their hits. He prerormed another body transfer and killed the second thug. The last thug, being the smallest, dropped his weapon and ran.

Kouziki: Exterminate him, he doesn't deserve to be a member.

Kamiya wiped himself off and yelled to Kouziki. The words were hard to hear over the crowd.

Kamiya: I've won now give me back my mother.
Kouziki: But we're not done yet. There are still several rounds to go. Round 2 BEGIN!

Before Kamiya could even get ready he felt a sharp pain in his leg. A kunai was jammed there. He pulled it out and pushed off with his good leg to avoid the attack.

Ninja: I see you are well skilled. No bother, you will be taken out quickly.

An ninja appeared before Kamiya who had grabbed some the weapons from the fallen thugs. He had daggers, kunai, needles, and even a sword. Kamiya held the sword in his left hand ready to strike. The ninja disappeared and reappeared before Kamiya could adjust. This was going to be a tough fight. He made some hand signs and touched the ground, it became quicksand which sucked the ninja down. He did this by creating water and flowing it underneath the ninja.

Ninja: Pretty good. But I'm not finished yet.

The ninja attempted to preform a handsign but Kamiya created a jet of sand and water which tore up the ninjas hand. He sunk lower and lower unitil he was finally submerged and drowned.

Kouziki: Bwahaha! To think you'd be this strong. The next round will be the final one, you won't win.

Kouziki stood up and jumped down to the arena floor.

Kouziki: Now you will have to face me.

Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-27 15:39:18


Actually, I just freewrite, but I try to keep a couple of ideas in my head just in case I run out of things to write about.

That last chapter was made up on the spot. It's not like I planned to make that hideout...It just came.


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Response to Naruto RP Crew 2008-09-28 01:14:38


Chapter 8: Drunken Fist

Rinn was accommodated in a very standard, but nice room he sat in his bed with his bag in his lap. He opened it and pulled out a few seeds. He closed his eyes and put the seeds in his mouth. One by one he slowly spit them out onto the floor and they formed into little vine people and vine buildings. Rinn kept his eyes closed, but the vine people began to move. One of the vine people seemed to be on his knees pleading to another vine person. The one standing kicked the vine man and the others grabbed him and tied him to Rinn's bed post. They looked as if they were burning him, but suddenly grass popped up around the bed post and the vine man disappeared.

Rinn: Hmm... that's when I escaped now when that stranger intercepted me...

The Vines all unraveled and formed into a mini forest. A vine man was running when suddenly he was kneed in the gut. Rinn frowned as he kept his eyes closed.

Rinn: Who are you...?

Rinn: I see you've been exiled

Rinn: What?!? Who are you!

Rinn: I should kill you or turn you in but since you made this all happen for me I'll let you go...

Rinn: Wait...! You're-

Rinn opened his eyes in realization. All the vines withered and Rinn sat in his bed in shock. He put the sack under his pillow and lay down.

Rinn: I know who framed me...

-The Next Day-

Rinn and Takada sat at a cafeteria table and ate breakfast. Takada had Eggs, bacon, and a bowl of cereal. Rinn however had Potato chips, burgers, and steaks. Rinn quickly gobbled everything down and belched.

Takada: Not a very healthy diet for a ninja...

Rinn: Whatever, the Hokage rarely gave me missions and besides, my Kekkei Genkai eats up lots of chakra... What happened back there anyway? I told you not to be stupid and help me, but you just stood there like a pussy.

Takada was about to object, but he remembered Rinn might've passed out during the final moments.

Rinn: Anyway, what's this I hear about a teacher? There's word around this joint he knows drunken fist.

Takada: Yeah, I think he's a descendent of Rock Lee.

Rinn: Really? That's crazy, I was taught by a man who was believed to be a great, great, great grandson of his last student... I think that student's name was something like Rojahn. He had a lot of history in cloud and Leaf, but all of it was destroyed during the Raid of the tailed beasts. They destroyed almost every Historic Archive in Leaf and Cloud.

Takada: No way, you're a liar, I've seen you fight and you don't fair so well in the Taijustu department.

Rinn: Well, I wasn't drunk. I rarely drink, but when I do... I'm very skilled in the art. I'm not top rank though because my sensei died of alcohol poisoning... dropped right in the middle of battle. He taught me the only way to truly master drunken fist was to be drunk... I hated the taste, but managed to meet all his requirements.

Takada: Maybe this teacher can help you master it.

Rinn: Yeah, maybe...

Takada finished up his meal and began to leave. Rinn yelled at him and Takada turned back.

Rinn: Hey! You know, we've never spared together.

Takada: You wanna? There's a gym somewhere arou-

Rinn moved all the tables out of the way with his plants and gave Takada a smirk. Takada returned the favor and got into stance.