At 7/23/05 09:48 PM, BrandonPClark wrote: I can't do anymore until I get my voice. I must have perfection dangit. If you can offer any constructive critisism whatsoever then... Go ahead and do it. I always seem to be on the short end of the stick when it comes to that.

Well since you want perfection, add some shading, that would make it really cool. I think something else is missing, but I can't seem to figure out what.

Shading makes the filesize huuuuuuuge. But that is a good suggestion (WHOOPS NOT ALLOWED :P) though.

I want to join, can I have Group 10, line 2? And what are the rules for the flash? Like widthxheight and frames per second?

500x400
24 fps
white bg
shadows behind objects (as if ur against a white wall)
around 3 seconds long

At 7/23/05 09:48 PM, BrandonPClark wrote: SimplyJay123: imageshack ur animation so far
SimplyJay123: :-)
BigArmyBug: haha ok
SimplyJay123: yay

http://img296.images..age=bpcscene14bj.swf

I can't do anymore until I get my voice. I must have perfection dangit. If you can offer any constructive critisism whatsoever then... Go ahead and do it. I always seem to be on the short end of the stick when it comes to that.

Along with all the other suggestions so far, take into consideration how long these need to be. We only want 2-3 seconds of flash, and yours is about 8 seconds it seems. And none of those people said the number yet! XD

Be sure to shorten it, and add the number being said somewhere. It only needs to be 2-3 seconds long.

He has his number in, he showed me on AIM. Ya, just put the voice in where the guy is being stabbed, not when it shows the two guys. Then show the two guys for a split second. That should shorten it up.

At 7/24/05 12:05 AM, Starogre wrote: He has his number in, he showed me on AIM. Ya, just put the voice in where the guy is being stabbed, not when it shows the two guys. Then show the two guys for a split second. That should shorten it up.

Oh really? Well ok then XP

BTW I love it the way it is anyway! So smooooooooooth fbfing! I'm jealous...lol

At 7/23/05 11:10 PM, Ultimate_TH wrote: Be sure to shorten it, and add the number being said somewhere. It only needs to be 2-3 seconds long.

thats mainly from lag, put it on low quality and youll see.

its kool but still not clear whats going on, and the fbf is quite simple. i dunno what it is it just doesnt seem as good as u could to me

I'm really close to being done, I've just gotta do something about the body, and maybe some BG elements.

http://img337.images..group7number79pb.swf

feedback?

At 7/24/05 01:04 AM, monkokio wrote: I'm really close to being done, I've just gotta do something about the body, and maybe some BG elements.

http://img337.images..group7number79pb.swf

feedback?

i like it, i like the artstyle, but maybe ad more to it, like he picks his nose or something, because atm its just to basic.

Ahh... finally got something as close to finished as I can without feedback.

~click~

...so any feedback?

Also, I haven't been really keeping up but if you are doing random selection for co-author positions, I would like to decline myself from the drawing.

One of the coolest things about this collab is that there are established artists and brand new artists with pieces side-by-side. I think it would be awesome if the more overlooked and/or brand new flashers got some of the co-author slots. I don't really need a bump to the old batting average, I'm already overrated. <3

Can I join? If so i'll be 10 or 9.

I'm finall back(i've been gone for a week in Indiana! No internet FOR A WEEk!! I cried...) and I'm FINALLY DONE READING ALL THE PAGES!!!! It took me a long 3 hours to read it all!!! God, so much drama, so much confusion, so much kick-ass animation! I am so proud of all of you, i could just give you all big hugs!! But I wont.....
Anyway, I'm here to remind some of you, If you need voices, I'm your man, I've got all ten numbers already recorded, and cut out. If you need a custom one just ask me!!!!

You can always contact me by:
email: llammalrdsofsci@gmail.com
(btw, if you want a gmail account ask me, i'll give ya one)
email: nathanhysong1986@hotmail.com
AIM: llammalrdsofsci
Yahoo: bandgeekdrumer
or MSN: nathanhysong1986@hotmail.com

BTW: Here is an example of mine so far(for those who didn't see it before)
http://img330.images..versarycollab2vg.swf

He's gonna shoot an 8 in bullet holes. Please tell me any suggestions, cheers jeers, whatever!

CHEDDAR!!! I'M ALIVE!!!!! you can call off the search dogs and tell the cops i'm fine. ^_^

At 7/23/05 05:02 PM, Mogly wrote:

At 7/23/05 04:59 PM, sweet_kat22 wrote: Bumpy

please stop doing that... if youve got something important to say then say it dont just do it for no reason. people dont click this for a reason, if there intrested, they will click it.

Plus one of the reasons people dislike collabs at the moment is because they clutter up the first page. Unnecessary bumping will only irritate people, particularly moderators.

At 7/24/05 01:22 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Ahh... finally got something as close to finished as I can without feedback.

I can't fault it, I really can't. Everything about it is awesome.

PS: Thanks for putting the portrait in your sig. <3

Cool idea. I'll join, I'll pick number 2. Just stick me in with any group you'd like.

At 7/24/05 02:09 AM, BrandonPClark wrote: I like this. The color is good, it's short and sweet. No complaints here. This one kinda makes me think I wen't a tad overboard.

<3

At 7/24/05 02:27 AM, AGH wrote: I can't fault it, I really can't. Everything about it is awesome.

<3 <3

PS: Thanks for putting the portrait in your sig. <3

Why hide? I'm a beautiful man. ;)
Thanks again for making it!
You're so impossibly talented, I can't wait to see what you have for this.

Since I'm already posting: any more comments?

If other people are like me they'll probably only look at the links on the last page.

At 7/24/05 02:27 AM, AGH wrote:

At 7/24/05 01:22 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Ahh... finally got something as close to finished as I can without feedback.

I can't fault it, I really can't. Everything about it is awesome.

I can =P Well, its nothing to do with the flas itself, thats great! I just think the sound could be a bit longer, thats all.

sorry for double post.

Im going to take longer than I thought, apparently I didnt save the file last night, Ill try to make up time, sorry.

At 7/24/05 03:24 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Since I'm already posting: any more comments?

If other people are like me they'll probably only look at the links on the last page.

i like it, i like the way its simple but do you think something else should be added, because its pretty plain, but i quite like that. its defiently one of the better ones that have come through.

Hey, I just finished my part! Here's the url:
http://www.wagnerstu..ies/NG10thanniv.html

I'll accept any comments.

That link won't load for me. It's taking forever...I have comcast internet and 3ghz processor. I think it's the link.

At 7/24/05 11:31 AM, Bit_Master wrote: Hey, I just finished my part! Here's the url:
http://www.wagnerstu..ies/NG10thanniv.html

I'll accept any comments.

It's great to see something different. There is one thing though, the animation has the appearance of lagging in some spots, like it pauses every few frames. Maybe that was intentional? I don't know, I think it would look better if the arm spinning motion was constant. Nice job though.

At 7/24/05 11:39 AM, AGH wrote: It's great to see something different. There is one thing though, the animation has the appearance of lagging in some spots, like it pauses every few frames. Maybe that was intentional? I don't know, I think it would look better if the arm spinning motion was constant. Nice job though.

It wasn't intentional. I think it's graphic intensive for some reason. Try lowering the quality, I'll set it to be automatic in a short bit.

I just fixed it up as much as I could. Now instead of lagging in random spots, it lags to make a constant framerate. I also removed a separation in the movement that isn't noticable.
http://www.wagnerstu..ies/NG10thanniv.html

I'll keep working on the smoothness of it.

At 7/24/05 12:00 PM, Bit_Master wrote: I just fixed it up as much as I could. Now instead of lagging in random spots, it lags to make a constant framerate. I also removed a separation in the movement that isn't noticable.
http://www.wagnerstu..ies/NG10thanniv.html

I'll keep working on the smoothness of it.

wont play for me for sum reason. can you put it up on image shack please?

Okay, im in, i'll do number 1

At 7/24/05 12:04 PM, N2tZ wrote: Okay, im in, i'll do number 1

okay, since 1 is taken, i'll take 9

At 7/24/05 12:03 PM, Mogly wrote: wont play for me for sum reason. can you put it up on image shack please?

Agreed.

At 7/24/05 12:03 PM, Mogly wrote: wont play for me for sum reason. can you put it up on image shack please?

http://img149.images..iverseryentry8ls.swf

Done. Use THIS LINK everybody! It's the least lagging edition.

that's actually really good! it needs a shadow though