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Need some criticism.

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Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-13 04:11:36


At 12/12/10 09:20 PM, Sha-ne wrote:
At 12/12/10 03:28 PM, Marklikeart wrote: some basic color
Looking good :)

well thank you :)

Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-16 15:39:43


slow and steady progress on my troll ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-19 12:15:02


ima poo poo in my pants!

Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-19 13:13:31


At 12/16/10 03:39 PM, Marklikeart wrote: slow and steady progress on my troll ^^

Definitely getting a better grasp on lighting.

Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-19 13:18:01


At 12/16/10 03:39 PM, Marklikeart wrote: slow and steady progress on my troll ^^

I'm liking that red tattoo on his arm :P


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Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-19 14:31:29


posting some small progress, thinking of adding some toddlers arounds his legs ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-29 13:30:10


A wip for my brother.

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Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-29 13:48:29


At 12/29/10 01:30 PM, Marklikeart wrote: A wip for my brother.

I'm likin' the way the tree wraps around the landform.

Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-30 05:10:38


well thank you ^^ I'm gonna ad alot of stuff to this picture.. ALOT!

Response to Need some criticism. 2010-12-30 08:56:36


At 12/19/10 02:31 PM, Marklikeart wrote: posting some small progress, thinking of adding some toddlers arounds his legs ^^

looking good so far dude!!!


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-04 08:31:17


wuuuaahh! forgot my sketchbook today. Drawing on post it-notes FTW!

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-05 12:55:40


some dude with dragonhead as his arm! I've noticed that all my characters left hand does nothing in all my pictures ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-05 14:24:32


this is what i got so far

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-05 14:35:12


I'm not sure if your intending to get the anatomy wrong for these orc dudes etc, (like over proportionate versions of humans or something like that) but they look pretty unrealistic. I know they are orcs or whatever but they just look odd..

Your good at detail in non anatomy elements though like those trees and the balls on his arm but I think you would benefit in looking up some tuts on human muscles/body and trying to draw a realistic human first before you go into drawing fantasy characters or whatever.

Sorry if you can draw with human anatomy and this is stylistic but it just looks a bit strange for me.


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-05 14:59:00


sure i could learn how to draw everything correctly, but it's so damn boring that it hurts my soul when i do it!

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-06 02:11:49


At 1/5/11 02:59 PM, Marklikeart wrote: sure i could learn how to draw everything correctly, but it's so damn boring that it hurts my soul when i do it!

It will help your drawing so much just by learning how to :)


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-06 11:21:23


Serious question, have i gotten any better at all ? x), 9 out of 10 pictures i get pissed and throw them away beucase it just looks wrong.

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-17 23:21:04


At 12/4/10 04:43 AM, Marklikeart wrote: first of all, you dont ask to be scouted and second this is my art thread where i want som hints and tips on my pictures.

Hence my second post.

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-18 05:15:18


At 1/17/11 11:21 PM, PR0T05T33L wrote:
At 12/4/10 04:43 AM, Marklikeart wrote: first of all, you dont ask to be scouted and second this is my art thread where i want som hints and tips on my pictures.
Hence my second post.

well that was kinda out of the blue.

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 14:14:59


well, been sometime since i posted any pictures but here's som sketches ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 14:16:25


more sketches

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 14:17:32


last sketch i have.

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 16:02:25


You have lots of potential


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 16:13:36


thanks :) i just hope i can use it some day :P

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 17:15:21


kinda liked the frog monster so i tuned him up a little.

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-26 17:43:02


At 1/26/11 05:15 PM, Marklikeart wrote: kinda liked the frog monster so i tuned him up a little.

That's a very nice style you've got going there, I really like it!

For this; the perspective looks a bit off, namely for the chopped-off arm.


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-27 02:17:05


ok thanks, ill try and fix it :)

Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-27 15:36:18


even tho everythings isn't quite right i figured, what the hell. I'll color it anyway ^^. I had a real hard time trying to figure out how to make it look like the eye i glowing, so this is what i came up with ^^. Any hints and tips on getting things to glow ?

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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-27 15:42:30


At 1/27/11 03:36 PM, Marklikeart wrote: Any hints and tips on getting things to glow?

Well, when I want things to glow, I usually just fill in the basic colours first, shade it completely, ignoring the glow, and then I'd treat the glow as a light source and highlight accordingly. Light sources are bright in the centre, so you might have to fade the eye out to promote the idea of it glowing.


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Response to Need some criticism. 2011-01-27 15:45:08


thanks alot, I'll make sure to try it out :D