At 9/9/10 06:02 AM, Peglay wrote:
i dont even get what that is :|
who really cares what it is, you can critique it none-the-le- what the hell IS that?
Let see, the main problem I can see is that it's way, way too sketchy for something that's tried to be in the "epic" line. Everything, I can see the individual scribbles and how you've managed to pass it off, and it hasn't worked. I'd advise trying to put more effort (ie doing it carefully, trying to simulate the shapes instead of the lines) into your lineart and cleaning it up.
The other thing that seems out of place is the words - they don't seem to fit in, period, and I doubt you could pass them off anyhow - they don't really fit ion with the visual medium. I'd say to get rid of them.