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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 16th, 2010 @ 05:42 AM Reply

At 9/15/10 06:29 PM, Marklikeart wrote:
At 9/15/10 02:31 PM, threadwood wrote: the last few look like you may have just traced some photos and added black shapes. i think your first post was more interesting than those.
I'm not tracing, but i am using myself as a reference.

Really?
That's quite a leap, compared to the second post.


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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 17th, 2010 @ 12:54 AM Reply

I think the break free one is better in black and white. The shadow on his arm looks amazing but the one on his back and shoulder seems flat. I noticed it in the color picture that the back one appears to have no weight to it. I know that's weird of me to say but smaller when it's farther away and larger when it's closer might help. I like what you do so don't think I'm all Negative Nancy.

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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 17th, 2010 @ 04:18 AM Reply

alright, thanks for the advice :)

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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 17th, 2010 @ 09:36 AM Reply

tentacle rapist man, he will literally be all over you!

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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 19th, 2010 @ 01:54 PM Reply

im not really done yet but i'm gonna post it anyway. So that you can say what you want :)

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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 21st, 2010 @ 01:28 PM Reply

ok guys and girls, im having a real trouble drawing something latley. I just keep giving up, having hard seeing the final picture. What do you guys do to keep yourself motivated ? :P

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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 21st, 2010 @ 01:34 PM Reply

At 9/21/10 01:28 PM, Marklikeart wrote: ok guys and girls, im having a real trouble drawing something latley. I just keep giving up, having hard seeing the final picture. What do you guys do to keep yourself motivated ? :P

Take a break. Look to other works that you admire for some inspiration. Or make a page of just random doodles, nothing too ambitious, just doodles.


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Response to Need some criticism. Sep. 25th, 2010 @ 04:18 PM Reply

since i cant draw anything serious anyway,so i decided to draw this ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 05:03 PM Reply

more crap!

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 05:06 PM Reply

tried to draw the dragon serious, turned out bad and then i just added the guy for fun x)

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 05:08 PM Reply

trying to draw some kind of landscape

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 05:11 PM Reply

a captain i saw on futurama yesterday

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 05:38 PM Reply

a gladiator!

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 06:04 PM Reply

At 10/4/10 05:11 PM, Marklikeart wrote: a captain i saw on futurama yesterday

i rly like this one :)


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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 4th, 2010 @ 06:18 PM Reply

well thank you :)

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:31 PM Reply

This is actually the first picture that i've spent time on, took me about 3 hours i think and i'm kinda proud of it ^^ Enjoy!

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:35 PM Reply

At 10/6/10 02:31 PM, Marklikeart wrote: This is actually the first picture that i've spent time on, took me about 3 hours i think and i'm kinda proud of it ^^ Enjoy!

He has two left hands.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:37 PM Reply

At 10/6/10 02:31 PM, Marklikeart wrote: This is actually the first picture that i've spent time on, took me about 3 hours i think and i'm kinda proud of it ^^ Enjoy!

You should rly work on the right hand, look weird.


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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:43 PM Reply

i've looked at my own hand i think it looks right, the palm of the hand is facing inwards and he is supposed to rest his hand ontop of the cave.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:51 PM Reply

There i've tried to make the hand look better

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:51 PM Reply

At 10/6/10 02:43 PM, Marklikeart wrote: i've looked at my own hand i think it looks right, the palm of the hand is facing inwards and he is supposed to rest his hand ontop of the cave.

Oh, so his hand is turned. Still, your hand can't rotate a full 180 degrees. You need to fix his arm angle then.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 02:51 PM Reply

At 10/6/10 02:31 PM, Marklikeart wrote: This is actually the first picture that i've spent time on, took me about 3 hours i think and i'm kinda proud of it ^^ Enjoy!

It's ok. Though the left hand is backwards and the arms are a little disproportionate. Also, it may just be me, but I feel that the composition looks quite confusing.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 03:19 PM Reply

Well he is a cyklop, he's supposed to like like a monster and monsters dosen't always follow the laws of proportions. Anyway i tried to fix the angle of the arm , oh and his left hand is not backwards.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 03:49 PM Reply

At 10/6/10 03:19 PM, Marklikeart wrote: Well he is a cyklop, he's supposed to like like a monster and monsters dosen't always follow the laws of proportions. Anyway i tried to fix the angle of the arm , oh and his left hand is not backwards.

i think you would be best to scrap that arms position, whether or not he is supposed to follow exact human anatomy or not doesnt change that the position of his right arm just throws off the entire picture.

to illustrate what i mean, go grab a GI-joe...or barbie or whatever and hold it in your left hand, go to a mirror and then try to recreate the cyclops' pose. watch your right arm the whole time from hand to shoulder and then, move your arm to a more natural position, study that and then (in my honest opinion) try to draw the more natural position, not on this drawing, just draw your arm in position on a new piece of paper, and do it over and over again :D

you should learn alot if you do that


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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 04:16 PM Reply

since i dont own a doll, i rather try geeting a good posture by trial and error ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 6th, 2010 @ 04:52 PM Reply

i just watched myself in the mirror and i started to wonder, did i use my ass to draw this picture. The arms just dosen't make any sense xD. Anyway better luck next time! Good night

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 8th, 2010 @ 11:59 AM Reply

So here is my crazy doctor, posting it in an early stage so that you can give hints and tips to what should be changed before i complete the picture. Also his right is supposed to have only 4 fingers.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 8th, 2010 @ 12:00 PM Reply

i mean left arm ^^

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 8th, 2010 @ 06:59 PM Reply

here is also an early stage picture, got a lot to fix, such as his shadow and making arms bigger/smaller and stuff like that.

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Response to Need some criticism. Oct. 9th, 2010 @ 06:39 AM Reply

its always the same.

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