Hey guys! this is my third animation, yet it has the least ammount of views. Please tell me what you think of my latest work.
At 8/10/10 10:46 PM, Domo wrote: Domo's resignation
Definitely sucks to see you go, but I suppose school has to come first. Hope to see you back soon!
At 8/12/10 02:02 PM, tyler2513 wrote: Hey I don't know if I should join but I'm the 47th Best Reviewer on Newgrounds.
That's a little irrelevant since we don't give quantity of reviews any significance in this club :P.
Quality's a bit more important in this case, and while some of your reviews are a little detailed, a lot are quite vague and badly structured to be honest. You seem to almost rush your reviews since a lot of them lack punctuation, proper grammar and there are a few typos here and there too.
What I would suggest is to read this and this, and take your time in your reviews. Structure them a bit better (the guides I linked you to will help you with that) and maybe re-read them when you're finished with them, adding some details which you might have forgot, removing some unnecessary comments, fixing typos, etc... Finally, try and make your reviews more detailed, making sure you talk about all the important aspects of the submission.
So yeah, if you want to join, try and make some more detailed, helpful and well-structured reviews first, and then come back so we can check out your reviews again. Good luck reviewing!
Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
My first new song since January, hope you enjoy.
Thanks you guys for accepting me in, and I'm glad to be a new member, and active! So hopefully I can get a string of 100%'s going there eh? Keep on soapbubble's back? hehe... ah well thanks guys, it's a good cause!
FEAR NOT MY BROTHERRRS! I AM ALIVE! :v
I just had to escape from the addiction to Monster Hunter for a bit to be able to get in here and mention that I'll once again attempt to do a review or two (I really wish I could find time to do a bunch of them to give my points a nice boost) so be ready for me to once again RIIIISE FROM MY GRAAAVE! >:v
God tier? Lol last time I checked, it was called "You suck at this game."
PSNID: Gran-Turismo-Man
Credit to Mr. Ryu of DustLoop for the pic below.
At 8/13/10 04:33 AM, spartacusxerox wrote: Thanks you guys for accepting me in, and I'm glad to be a new member, and active! So hopefully I can get a string of 100%'s going there eh? Keep on soapbubble's back? hehe... ah well thanks guys, it's a good cause!
Speaking of 100 %, I haven't even finished art and flash yet. Oh gawd.
Meet the Mayor.
At 8/14/10 05:59 PM, Soapbubble wrote:At 8/13/10 04:33 AM, spartacusxerox wrote: Thanks you guys for accepting me in, and I'm glad to be a new member, and active! So hopefully I can get a string of 100%'s going there eh? Keep on soapbubble's back? hehe... ah well thanks guys, it's a good cause!Speaking of 100 %, I haven't even finished art and flash yet. Oh gawd.
I wouldn't start sweating yet :P I won't do the update until late on Sunday (it's still Saturday here :P)
And if people need extensions, I have no problem giving them. (:
Well. My computer just went on the fritz. For good this time, it seems. I'm ordering a new one tomorrow, but it wont be here in a couple of days. Maybe Wednesday. Next week, I'll probably be at 100 % again.
Meet the Mayor.
At 8/14/10 06:29 PM, Animith wrote:At 8/14/10 05:59 PM, Soapbubble wrote:I wouldn't start sweating yet :P I won't do the update until late on Sunday (it's still Saturday here :P)At 8/13/10 04:33 AM, spartacusxerox wrote: Thanks you guys for accepting me in, and I'm glad to be a new member, and active! So hopefully I can get a string of 100%'s going there eh? Keep on soapbubble's back? hehe... ah well thanks guys, it's a good cause!Speaking of 100 %, I haven't even finished art and flash yet. Oh gawd.
And if people need extensions, I have no problem giving them. (:
Procrastinated and won't be able to review until after clock day. I've only done maybe one on the list so far so i'm not anywhere near the 100% mark which sucks. I would need a major extension of like 12 hours :/ so if nobody else objects to the update you can just make it and i'll get a head start on the next list.
PPPPLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
^ a fancyful little beat with all kinds of nutty synth crap
^ my shining masterpiece
^ some trippy bullcrap
Heyo!
I recently built a über PC for making music, and might I say that I LOVE IT! After installing all neccessities I jump right to work! After many, many hours, this is what I achieved. It's different from my other works in many ways, but the biggest difference is the amount of instruments I've used in this ;) All thanks to my new computer <3
Please review, and tell me what YOU think of it! Thank you, and enjoy!
I'll do at least a few now. Do a review, vote in portal, do a review, vote in portal, do a review, vote in portal.
Meet the Mayor.
Quick post; things have been a little too hectic today, so I will do the requests list and update tomorrow. Or for those in my timezone, later on today xD. Monday, nonetheless. See you all then (:
Please check this one out. Its been the victim of some 0 bombers, which is a shame as i want to hear what someone thinks about it. Thanks!
At 8/15/10 08:23 PM, Animith wrote: Quick post; things have been a little too hectic today, so I will do the requests list and update tomorrow. Or for those in my timezone, later on today xD. Monday, nonetheless. See you all then (:
I don't mind. Gives me time to get three of four more reviews done. Review some of the audio that hasn't been reviewed this week.
Meet the Mayor.
Isn't it so that if you geto 100 % you can request a flash that isn't your own? I've gotten 100 % a couple of times, so I'd like to request this one reviewed. Another flash for us, seeing as we have so few of those.
Meet the Mayor.
This is both the smallest and most imbalanced list I've seen in months :S
FLASH REQUESTS [3]
Escape from the Big Apple by Pabmo
The Best Video Game Ever by DarkMatter2
King of the Hill v2 by Niallmcfc
AUDIO REQUESTS [18]
[Assios]-Eternal Rave by Assios
The rise of- by Tomppaah
cmb79-datfish2 by cheesemonkeybill
Epic_Toxin3 by ekso-man
Gazing at a Starry Night edit1 by tigger888
Flight of a Wingless Angel by Nosferatu-of-Worms
Seashore Ambiance [WIP] by jxl180
Arabic Metal (Jeffaro) by Jeffaro
Band On The Run (TrippMix) by Blackdoom13
Triage at Dawn [Remix] by DjCryogenetic
-Lullaby by BlazingDragon
Are U Ready {Dj-Abbic mix WIP by DjAbbic
--Cold Misty Morning by spartacusxerox
Arabes by camoshark
IT [LK] by Lightkeeper
BAZ-Clam Hat by BAZmotherfucker
~||Video Games by T-Free
Wave Jupitar by DXSamurai
EXTRA AUDIO [3]
Epic Metal Loop by Jeffaro
cmb-Kill A Baby! >:d lml by cheesemonkeybill
cmb-weird happy song :D by cheesemonkeybill
21 requests; no art, three flash. Have fun audio fans?
At 8/16/10 11:17 AM, Animith wrote: This is both the smallest and most imbalanced list I've seen in months :S
FLASH REQUESTS [3]
AUDIO REQUESTS [18]
EXTRA AUDIO [3]
Not bad, not bad at all. IF anyone wants to go for 100 %, this is the week to do it. I might even try it myself.
Meet the Mayor.
The Brass seems to be wrong.
At 8/16/10 11:17 AM, Animith wrote: This is both the smallest and most imbalanced list I've seen in months :S
FLASH REQUESTS [3]
AUDIO REQUESTS [18]
Hm, apart from there being no art requests and of course much too many audio requests, this list doesn't look too bad.
Hopefully I can do more than only 3 reviews this time. :'(
Surf Nazis must die! || Wi/Ht? #38
At 8/16/10 11:17 AM, Animith wrote: FLASH REQUESTS [3]
AUDIO REQUESTS [18]
EXTRA AUDIO [3]
I guess it would be fitting that this be the week that I get back to reviewing most if not all of the stuff on the list. Smaller list with mostly audio, something that I really need to get back to reviewing more of.
Hey all, sorry for the lateness. Member update, nonetheless...
This week was a bit of a misfire. And by misfire I mean there were about 11-12 audio which got absolutely no reviews on them from the RRC.
As I still just about have the updates for one more week (muahahahahaaaa), I'm gonna say that anyone who this week goes back to last week's list list and does some more reviews, especially on the audio that didn't get any, I'll make sure to add them to your points in time for next week's update, just to see if we can't salvage that a little.
We also sadly lost Domo as a reviewer this week and I'm heading that way as well, but hopefully we might get some new people in as the club and the request list continues to grow.
But that all being said, we've got a pretty friendly-looking request list this week so maybe we'll all come back fightin' :P Without further rambling, here's the update. Number 50, no less:
Member's Update #50!
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 6610 | 1033 / 1370 | 75.40% || 021 | 03 / 31 | 009.68% | Haggard
02 ) 6532 | 1021 / 1369 | 74.58% || 015 | 02 / 31 | 006.45% | Coop83
03 ) 3564 | 0551 / 1341 | 41.09% || 072 | 12 / 30 | 040.00% | Fro
04 ) 2720 | 0422 / 1249 | 33.79% || 015 | 02 / 31 | 006.45% | Supersteph54
05 ) 1943 | 0308 / 0605 | 50.91% || 003 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | Animith
06 ) 1732 | 0272 / 0750 | 36.27% || 000 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | RogerBK
07 ) 1499 | 0242 / 0423 | 57.21% || 003 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | sixflab
08 ) 1087 | 0175 / 0201 | 87.06% || 099 | 16 / 31 | 051.61% | Soapbubble
09 ) 0803 | 0120 / 0962 | 12.47% || 000 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | Celx-Requin
10 ) 0570 | 0090 / 0979 | 09.19% || 006 | 01 / 31 | 003.23% | Joshsouza
12 ) 0319 | 0049 / 0601 | 08.15% || 000 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | ChampionAnwar
13 ) 0144 | 0023 / 0089 | 25.84% || 039 | 06 / 59 | 020.00% | spartacusxerox
14 ) 0102 | 0015 / 0176 | 08.52% || 006 | 01 / 31 | 003.23% | mrty
15 ) 0079 | 0010 / 0335 | 02.99% || 003 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | CheppZanoff**
16 ) 0071 | 0011 / 0255 | 04.31% || 000 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | Spysociety
17 ) 0060 | 0009 / 0121 | 07.44% || 000 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | TheNewYorkTimes
18 ) 0033 | 0005 / 0057 | 08.77% || 024 | 04 / 31 | 012.90% | ThePigeonMaster
The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
**: User has been inactive for the last four weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last six weeks
****: User has been inactive for the last eight weeks
If you are inactive for more than six weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than eight weeks you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.
*Requests This Week: 31
Total Requests All Time: 1370
Reviews Made This Week: 53
Total Reviews All Time: 5095
Average Per Member: 2.94
Average Per Request: 1.71
Sigs Forgotten: 0
*New to the List: None
Leaving the List: Domo :(
*All Requests Completed (both weeks): None :(
At 8/16/10 05:31 PM, Animith wrote: Hey all, sorry for the lateness. Member update, nonetheless...
This week was a bit of a misfire. And by misfire I mean there were about 11-12 audio which got absolutely no reviews on them from the RRC.
Seeing as I apparently didn't do anything this week i'll go back and get as many as I can from last week in addition to doing this week's list. Least I can do for my slacking last month.
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Hello! Welcome to the new Review Request Club thread. This thread is meant to give the club a fresh start and make it a pleasant place to stay. In order to do this, it goes without saying that you must follow the regular BBS rules and read the C&C Advice Thread before posting if you are new to this forum.\par
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This club aims to increase the exposure of the most under-rated Newgrounds music, art and flash artists. The other major purpose of the club is to offer the Newgrounds artists high quality feedback so they can constantly improve their work.\par
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To the requesters:\par
Every Newgrounds user is allowed to request a review as soon as he submitted something. To get your work reviewed, don't post here without thinking but follow these few rules:\par
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- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.\par
- Make no more than 3 Flash and Art requests between two updates (that's one week), and no more than 3 Audio Requests between 5 updates (that's four weeks).\par
- Please respond to reviews, reviewers like it and some of them are statwho... oh wait, interested in stats.\par
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you requested, or if you requested more than 1 Audio submission, you may not see reviews on your second submission up until 3 weeks after you requested, and you may not see reviews on your third submission up until 4 weeks after you requested.\par
- Do NOT request without posting a link, be kind, reviewers are not robots.\par
- Do NOT simply say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.\par
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.\par
- Do NOT request reviews for a submission with over 50 reviews.\par
- Do NOT request reviews for spam. Spam is only there to annoy, not to be critically analyzed.\par
- Unless you are a club member, only request reviews for YOUR OWN submissions.\par
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To the reviewers:\par
If you want to join the club and complete requests, simply post in the thread saying you would like to join. Then, regular members will go through your reviews and determine if they are good enough to be part of the club. Your reviews are required to be helpful, developed and well-organised. If you need help with writing good reviews, read Fro's guide to writing helpful reviews.\par
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Once you are accepted, you can start reviewing stuff. If you are a new member of the club, once you understand how the point system works, please post - one or two days before the update - the total points you've earned during the week. This is considered as a sort of application form, and if you fail to do so, you will NOT be added to the club.\par
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Points System:\par
List updaters will keep track of each member's points in order to build a list. You don't need to post your points before each update but you can keep track of your score on your own so any error can be fixed. This is how points are counted:\par
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5 points for a review on a requested submission (movie, game, art, or audio).\par
1 point for writing "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review.\par
3 points for posting at least once throughout the two weeks.\par
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post).\par
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations between two updates.\par
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Club Updates:\par
Each Sunday or Monday, a list of all the members is created, counting up their points, featuring various stats and posting a list of requested submissions. Assuming you review the submissions in that list, you will get points for them accordingly in the following members' update, around a week later.\par
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Don't forget the lists are built and updated by humans so it may be possible the update is delayed due to various real life reasons. If it ever occurs, don't get mad; calm down and wait :).\par
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Frequently Asked Questions:\par
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Should we have an FAQ?\par
I don't know. It kinda seems like overkill.\par
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Why a new thread?\par
The main idea was to give the club a new and fresh start. Since the old one was flooded by requests and not updated any more, the RRC regulars thought creating a new thread would be best for the club.\par
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Should I link to the club in my forum signature?\par
There's no obligation to do so, but it's certainly appreciated. Remember that you can put a high number in place of the page number in the URL and if that page doesn't exist yet, Newgrounds will take you to the latest page, whatever it is. For example, "http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/107 2042/999" will take you to the latest page of this club.\par
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RRC Signature?\par
Yes, at the end of each review, if you want you can write down 'Review Request Club'. There is no obligation to do so, but you'll get +1 point if you put the RRC signature in your review. You can add anything you want to it, E.G.: *Review Request Club*, |Review Request Club|, -Review Request Club-, etc, but as long as 'Review Request Club' is clearly written, you will get the point. You are also allowed to add the sig in any reviews other than requests in this club, as long as you are a club member yourself. It's all the more exposure for the club, and it's very much appreciated.\par
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+1 point if I put the RRC signature in my review... I'm not sure if I get it correctly.\par
You gain 6 points for a review on a request with "Review Request Club" in the end of it, as opposed to 5 points if you hadn't added the signature at the end. If it's still not clear, read this.\par
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Does the Review Request Club review for non-NG stuff?\par
No. It must be an NG submission. If you have a non-NG submission which you would like us to review, then use your common sense and upload it to NG. Also, we will only review using the 'Write a Review' method on submissions. We won't send reviews by PM, review in your newspost or review in any particular thread of yours.\par
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Do I have to review all the requests?\par
No you don't have to, just do your best :). Though completing them all will give you 7 extra points.\par
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Which requests should I review?\par
If you want to get points for the next member's update, look for the latest requests list in the club thread and review the requests from that list. If you review any requests from various posts in the thread which would have been posted after the latest requests list, you will be getting points for the member's update after the next one.\par
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can u review allz mah flashz guise? kthxbai.\par
No.\par
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At 8/16/10 05:31 PM, Animith wrote: Hey all, sorry for the lateness. Member update, nonetheless...
Thanks, nonetheless!
This week was a bit of a misfire. And by misfire I mean there were about 11-12 audio which got absolutely no reviews on them from the RRC.
I saw that. I think the problem mainly lies in too few reviews per reviewer. We'll all just have to review more ever week. Spread it out.
As I still just about have the updates for one more week (muahahahahaaaa), I'm gonna say that anyone who this week goes back to last week's list list and does some more reviews, especially on the audio that didn't get any, I'll make sure to add them to your points in time for next week's update, just to see if we can't salvage that a little.
Don't count on me managing to do that.
We also sadly lost Domo as a reviewer this week and I'm heading that way as well, but hopefully we might get some new people in as the club and the request list continues to grow.
You're leaving?
But that all being said, we've got a pretty friendly-looking request list this week so maybe we'll all come back fightin' :P Without further rambling, here's the update. Number 50, no less:
50, eh? That's kinda big.
07 ) 1499 | 0242 / 0423 | 57.21% || 003 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | sixflab
08 ) 1087 | 0175 / 0201 | 87.06% || 099 | 16 / 31 | 051.61% | Soapbubble
I'm closing in!
*Requests This Week: 31
Reviews Made This Week: 53
In theory, that's enough to get one review per request.
Leaving the List: Domo :(
:(
*All Requests Completed (both weeks): None :(
Sorry.
Meet the Mayor.
At 8/16/10 05:31 PM, Animith wrote: Hey all, sorry for the lateness. Member update, nonetheless...
We understand.
This week was a bit of a misfire. And by misfire I mean there were about 11-12 audio which got absolutely no reviews on them from the RRC.
Oh no!
As I still just about have the updates for one more week (muahahahahaaaa), I'm gonna say that anyone who this week goes back to last week's list list and does some more reviews, especially on the audio that didn't get any, I'll make sure to add them to your points in time for next week's update, just to see if we can't salvage that a little.
Well that makes things a bit messy.
We also sadly lost Domo as a reviewer this week and I'm heading that way as well, but hopefully we might get some new people in as the club and the request list continues to grow.
Farewell Domo. Nice knowing ya for the short time I knew ya. By name.
But that all being said, we've got a pretty friendly-looking request list this week so maybe we'll all come back fightin' :P Without further rambling, here's the update. Number 50, no less:
Yay! 50!
Member's Update #50!
Yay! 50!
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
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03 ) 3564 | 0551 / 1341 | 41.09% || 072 | 12 / 30 | 040.00% | Fro
Fro is the maaaaaan. Steady aaaaaaaaas.
04 ) 2720 | 0422 / 1249 | 33.79% || 015 | 02 / 31 | 006.45% | Supersteph54
05 ) 1943 | 0308 / 0605 | 50.91% || 003 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | Animith
Animith is da bom...
06 ) 1732 | 0272 / 0750 | 36.27% || 000 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | RogerBK
07 ) 1499 | 0242 / 0423 | 57.21% || 003 | 00 / 31 | 000.00% | sixflab
sixflab is the cooooool.
08 ) 1087 | 0175 / 0201 | 87.06% || 099 | 16 / 31 | 051.61% | Soapbubble
soap is a legeeend. Connnsistennt.
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13 ) 0144 | 0023 / 0089 | 25.84% || 039 | 06 / 59 | 020.00% | spartacusxerox
This guy's alright.
14 ) 0102 | 0015 / 0176 | 08.52% || 006 | 01 / 31 | 003.23% | mrty
15 ) 0079 | 0010 / 0335 | 02.99% || 003 | 00 / 60 | 000.00% | CheppZanoff**
Is it normal to get this many 0%? I'm new here.
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*New to the List: None
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Leaving the List: Domo :(
:((
*All Requests Completed (both weeks): None :(
:((( That's me. That's me next week guys! That's me.
can you review this?
Bipolar Smiley: (:(
Ahaha, I completely botched up that member update. Some of the people still have "/60" listed as their request numbers. Sorry all, I realised it was very late and I hadn't done it, it was something of a rush job. I'l make sure all the numbers are straightened out for the next update. My bad :(
At 8/17/10 12:30 PM, Animith wrote: Ahaha, I completely botched up that member update. Some of the people still have "/60" listed as their request numbers. Sorry all, I realised it was very late and I hadn't done it, it was something of a rush job. I'l make sure all the numbers are straightened out for the next update. My bad :(
Didn't even notice it, man. Don't worry, we're not that picky, shit happens from time to time.
At 8/17/10 06:00 AM, spartacusxerox wrote:At 8/16/10 05:31 PM, Animith wrote: 08 ) 1087 | 0175 / 0201 | 87.06% || 099 | 16 / 31 | 051.61% | Soapbubblesoap is a legeeend. Connnsistennt.
Oh you.
Gotta say, I really like your reviews. Really detailed and helpful. Keep that up!
Meet the Mayor.
