Score: 9
"Awesome"
date: February 14, 2009
I truly enjoyed this piece, and I am suprised it hasn't gotten more reviews. It's weird returning to newgrounds and seeing how far you're music has progressed (I had reviewed your "When the Fighting Stops" a few months back).
Anyway, I see what you're saying with the ending, when the piece starts it does not leave one to expect it would end in the way it did. Still though, the ending is fine and you do not really have to change it. It seems to provide just the right closure for the song.
What I think could be worked on a little in this song is building it up to more of a climax leading up to the ending, the piece is brilliant but to me it never seems to really go somewhere. I think if you add a bit more tension in the middle and bring it back down to the ending that would have made it even better. Overall, the piece was soothing and I really liked it.
I'm going to go listen to some more of your songs, good work.
February 14, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the review! I was very surprised to find the scores of most of my songs improve, and I assume that you are the cause.
If I ever decide to revise the song, I will be sure to take your suggestions into account.
Thanks,
Sycross