Excellent Work Once More
You have done a great job with this piece. I truly enjoy the melody. It does, however, become a bit repetitive at times. It seems to be repeated throughout the entire song, or at least a majority of it. You change the voices that play it, but it essentially stays the same from what I hear. Repitition is not always a bad thing, it allows the listener to take in fully what is occuring what is going on within the piece, but too much could make it take a turn for the worse. My advice on any upcoming pieces is to make more variations on the melody within the piece, and bring out and further develop any counter melodies as well. Overall you did a great job and made a wonderful piece.
Hey, sorry I didn't respond to this earlier.
Thanks for your comments, I always appreciate them. My goal in writing this song was to see if I could develop a theme into a full-length song, and that's probably why it may be a little repetitive.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Great build up in the beginning. The melody is a bit repetitive but you always give a new instrument on it and the main percussion takes the whole track on it's back. So it never becomes boring or something.
I love the rythm and the arrangement of the percussion set - really driving and dinamic. And the strings are a perfect guidance for them.
I can't really find any bad points for the track. Nice job - keep up this good work,
Thank you! Always glad to read a good review.
Everything was great, except the epic missing ending. Even a smooth, calm ending would've been great instead of 13 seconds silence. But, it still a nice song, so...
Do I really have 13 seconds of silence? Crap... must have been something Sony ACID added in.
Thanks for the review, I will relisten and remove if there is indeed said silence.
Very Nicely Done
Sounds great from what I'm hearing.
You did really great on this =].
I give your song 10/10 and 5/5.
I don't know why this has a 3 but its a pretty nice song. It has a beat that you could imagine in a tense situation at night.
Yea, newgrounds score's are always not as high as I would like... but, hey, the great reviews make up for it! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.