The picture isn't the best, but you're not bad. I knocked you down a ha-star for your bitchy attitude against some of the other reviewers. If someone gives you advice on how to better your art, you should take it. Also, try to emotionally detach yourself from your work. I'm not saying don't care about your art period, I'm just saying don't think that what you make is "the best thing ever": try to be modest.