Stupendous!
Another masterpiece Maestro. I can see the war right before my eyes. The gunfire, the machine guns, the grenades being thrown with destruction and chaos before others eyes, knowing running into the field will become your fate of either life or death. Amazing! Simply loved it.
The-Great-One
Excellent
As the tanks roll over the dead bodies, I look up at the airplanes soaring in the sky,
intent on wiping our kind off the face of the earth. Suddenly, a large transport comes from under the water. Staring hell in the face, I look up with contempt and disgust on my face. The door slowly opens, casting a large shadow over the battlefield, as enemies pour out, we are overwhelmed. There is no chance in winning. I hear a loud noise in the crimson skies, and I watch the soaring airplanes pass by, frozen. I see a white flash of light and it is over.
Pardon my several spelling mistakes, but take note, that I am a mere eleven year old. I love your work, it helps me IMAGINE. Keep up the excellent work!
Wow...
I read the storys from Zen and I want to make my own...but for some reason I can never put what is going on in my mind to words, if I did...it would probably be a bunch of jibberish and no one but me would understand it. Anyway, I really like this song, it makes me think...I really wish I could put it to words...
Read my review of -=Defiance=- first
As I said it might be preferable that you read my review of your song -=Defiance=- first since thats where the first part of this story is. So now I shall continue the story.
The demonic wizard (now that hes in hell he is demonic) asks the guardians of satan to let him go speak to him. But the guardians tell him that is is not worthy of speaking to the almighty master of the abyss, so the wizard (his name is Dreadarios) challenges the guardians to defeat him. The guardians, who each about 2 times taller than him had no fear of him, so they accepted the challenge and both at the same time, blowed fire on him. Dreadarios made a magical shiel of black fire and stopped all of the fire and then throwed a black rose in front of the two guardians. The guardians looked at the rose for a moment, and then, the rose started growing immense vines, that grabbed the demons and started plunging them in the ground (yes below hell there is not much that can survive). And so the demonic wizard entered Satan's Chamber. Dreadarios saw Satan, sitting on his throne, but he had underestimated his enemy. Satan leaped out of his throne and landed right in front of Dreadarios. He was 3 times taller than the wizard and was so scary that even made the most cruel, cold hearted wizard shiver. The epic fight started and lasted hours and hours. Fianlly the wizard managed to turn hell's army against satan. Treason was a thing they loved, and so they destroyed satan. Now Dreadarios was the devil himself.
Meanwhile that happening, Siriastus, the holly archwizard, was planning to go see god to seek out help.
I'm gonna do the rest this afternoon cuz now im a little bit tired of writing xD and I will make the rest of the story in a palce for dreams and my final part will be in crumbling cathedral, where darkness and light clash in a dreaded melee. Ill try to make a nice surprise at the end =3
Sweet
NICE DONE!!!!!!