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Reviews for "Alone - dXs Backstory"

........ original 4 sur or maybe not ..........

the graphincz were Ok ...... if U spent a little more time on the graphics it could be way better .How U made the characterz move and stuff wuz pretty bad.... the sound wuz pretty lousy and all, I had a hard time hearin wut they R sayin... add a little emotion and it can go a long way... but over all the story line is really good, itz got potencial I hope 2 see more of this seriez ...
Rock ON !!!!!!!!!!

A Decent Intro

Well, I'll take your word that you plan to include some action in the subsequent episodes. Concerning this flash, you did a great job creating a premise/intro to the series. While a lot of reviewers will be keying on "emotion" as a point to criticize, I bet you kept the dude's voice the way it was for effect (a slightly emotionless individual, probably). In any case, the voice fit for the intro, but probably won't fit for the next episodes. Consider using an adrenaline-packed voice for the action!

Graphics were good in the form of old film-like effects. The low score on sound was, obviously, due to the lack of action in the film (not too much of a lowpoint). I'll be looking forward to the next episode.

data-shell responds:

Thank you. Yes there was a purpose to his bland talk. He's just stating facts, and he doesn't especially enjoy talking about his past because of the pain it brings, so he blocks it out with pretending to not care.

Although I still should have waited til I was awake enough, and not sick, to have read his lines.

Awesome

Very good job. Very good story.

8

A bit long, but that is ok. I could kind of tell that you were starting to get tired of talking, because you would start to mumble a bit. Did you do the whole sound file at once? That must of been pretty hard.

Ryan

good drawing, story

could use more animation, and more interesting voices