Awesome can't wait for the rest of it. I noticed several grammatical errors, but hopefully they will get fixed in the next game.
Reviews for "Re:Maid Ch. 1 (OLD)"
marblesyrup responds:
We might miss them so feel free to report (by pm, for example) any oddities you come across
i simply dont like visual novels, but i have to write a review because i was super disappointed when i didnt get to fuck both of them in one game.
The story and characters are hilarious and entertaining. The dialogue seems to be of a regular teenager so it's alright. I laughed at some of the dialogue as it seemed cringe-worthy afffffffffff.
sex scene with erika is kinda poor looking. Especially the dick, vagina, dudes hand, his shirt..
the girls and special scenes should be top priority, im ok with shitty looking backgrounds.
marblesyrup responds:
That's a graphics layering glitch, not the fault of the artist but the scripter. it will be fixed and looking top notch for the full release..!
There are only 3 possible unique scenes right? Hooking up with Hana, Erika blowing you, or you taking nude pictures. Does getting neither of them count as an ending?
I'm not gonna mention the eyes. There're a few mistakes in the text though. Nothing major but something I'm sure you will fix. The graphics are wonderful and the author's commentary really adds a lot, like explanations and background. And it's funny. I'm sure someone before has mentioned, but I would love seeing more of Erika as a maid.
Really looking forward to the full game. Especially when you can bang Erika. Will there be more girls and do you have a date for the release on newgrounds?