Sorry to hear about the copyright graphics stuff, but in hindsight you should of know better. But hey, this turn out to be quite nicer than the old one, so i guess it a good thing then.
The changes done to the story was nice, offering a more detailed world-building.
There are some grammar errors left here and there. Also, there is a weird graphic error where Erika's eyes disappeared making her look like something out of a creepypasta. I think it happen whenever she "smile". For example, one of the instance is the scene where you sit at lunch with her, just before inviting her to the hiking trip.
Anyway, game is good as usual. Keep up the good work guys.