It is.. good. The story is definitely interesting, and I am intrigued to know more. Thank you for telling us that the game is unfinished, because if not i will be scratching myself to baldness looking for the last ending. Is the narrator the hero? Will they get together in the end? What caused this situation? Only the writer knows, as things stand.
I agree that the jungle and last boss need reworks. For the jungle part, I stopped trying in the end and I just stand still and hope the RNG works in my favor. It works! And the last boss is definitely too easy.
For now, I can only imagine how awesome it is for the game to be finished, and now that you published this I believe that you'll get some help.