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the thing was good. it was kind of funny i got a laugh out of it. but it has some flaws. like the fact that it really is not that much of a game and also adding zero point medals to it was a useless feature. next time you should wait till there approved. it was fine the music choice was good the idea was original the formatting was fine but it has room for improvements.
Thanks, I might redo this and add in all of the ideas you guys suggested
A review of reviews...
Well. its nice to see an Author who pays attention to their reviews...
Though, this isnt really much of a game now, is it?
You should have created a small boss battle after each of the reviews. Have it kinda in the style of Grindhouse, with the voiceover and stuff.
Overall; no gameplay whatsoever is a problem. But as i said, least you take the time to respond to the reviews.
Thanks, Well it's more interactive than a movie so yeah.
Needs better formatting
I know it can be difficult to get the piece sorted for when you're publishing screen shots of a game, but there is one major issue here - the larger reviews get all squashed up, thus giving more face time to the short reviewer.
I'd have made the screen bigger, to accommodate the largest review and then used blank space (Newground background colours) for the empty space on the smaller reviews. Spending a little time marrying the review to the standard background could be useful as well, as it makes it look better.
Have you considered a voice actor to read out these reviews? I think that I could do a few voices for these reviews, which would make the experience sound a lot better, so that people can get a more encompassing presentation.
[Review Request Club]
I'm a voice actor but I thought about reading out the reviews but I guess I left out that idea.
Thanks for the review
and then
the infinitely multiplying pasta enveloped my mind
Ok? lol