needs work
i agree that it needs work but that's what practice is. personally ride recommend that as you get better, remake this animation and smooth it out a bit. all in all it has a good storyline with an ending that can lead to sequels if people give it a chance.
thx for the review :)
sweet
one of the less scary movies ive seen,but wont give you nightmares.
whats the meaning of the story?
Find that for yourself, thats the whole point ;) But to me it is a story through a childs perspective on evil's random behavior, but thats only in a word and there are other things too.
liked the use of sounds
And the ending reference. That's it though, mate.
I wish I could call that mildly constructive, but I can't, mate.
Well. . .
You are just beginning, so you just need to keep practicing, let's see how time tells.
Meh.
Wasn't the worst i've seen it was actually half decent but nothing great. The animation was on the poor side, the sounds you used didn't always fit in but it was pretty smooth. I've seen worse but i've seen alot better as well so id give a 4/10 2/5.
compared to the highest standards I don't know how good this flash is, but hopefully some people will enjoy it for how it is. Thx for the review