Creepy.
I'd call it more-so a tragedy. But regardless, it really was horrifying to see something like that. I'm rather surprised that this hasn't been thought up.
The drawing doesn't have to be top notch. As long as you put in a serious effort and played to the plot well. In fact, the drawings weren't all that bad at all. The music's simple yet scratchy tone made it feel like a horror film from the 80s (which is good, by the way) so it created more of an eerie feeling to the entire thing.
You can't help but feel bad for the girl in the end. You really can't. I am happy to see that this isn't some boring, usual flash trying to be funny with stupid punchlines but actually brings something to the table. Imagine if this happened in the games. Now THAT'S something to ponder about.
If this flash is not on the top 20 of some kind, I'm going to break somebody's neck. You did a good job with this.