Reviews for Why this?

[fiendauthorling]

It could use work...

I get that this is supposed to be an 'art' game, right within the first few seconds of playing. I believe I understand the message you are trying to convey, about the man killing his wife and being sorry, so he kills himself?
So here are some tips to improve the game:
- Make the walking at least a little faster.
- I know the character is not supposed to remember anything, but try to flesh out the plot so the player is more affected by what happens, and cares.
- Improve the graphics. Drawing by mouse is hard, but there are many other pixel type games out there that far surpass this. If you are going to create something, take the time and effort to make it look nice.
- Perhaps give the players some options instead of just having them walking around?
- I do not believe your first language is English, so I would suggest finding someone who can better translate your story for you.

You get three points for trying. With all the helpful tips everyone is giving, I'm sure you can either improve this work, or have a better creation next time.

~Fiend

[Arabellaten]

Umm...

Alright. I'm not going to criticize you because so many other people have. The only thing I would like to say is, if you're gonna make us wait for the badge, then how about a mute button? People always appreciate a mute button.

[Dim79]

Nice concept but gets to the point way to quick.

Id like to say you get an A for effort but honestly i cant do that.
Impressive you did all the drawings with just the mouse however this game needs alot of work.

Im a fan of games like this, where it has some message or meaning behind it, but this isnt really a game, you just move in 1 direction untill the end and thats it.

The concept is good, but you get to the point WAY to quick.

I have the same problem with my writing when i write stories. Try to add more substance to your next game. Give us a long and and curvy road to follow with alot of turns and dead ends. It's the mystery in trying to figure out the meaning that makes games like this fun.
If you go ahead and tell us the answer right off the bat then that ruins the game.

And i have to ask, what was that counter for that came up in the middle?

[riffmaster32]

Boring

This was an extremely boring game. The story's been used way too many times in other media.

[ZezimaXL]

Not good...

There is no plot, very short, the game doesn't have much of a meaning, and it looks like not that much effort was put into this.