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Reviews for "EVolution-pilot"
I like it
I really enjoy where the story is going, and I hope it continues on like this. You say its slow gong, but I think its more interesting than a super high paced, action sort of thing. The only thing I think you could really improve on is the art. Using a photo of the milky way in the opening scene was very awkward, and the evolved humans just looked like standard aliens, but of course it is hard to be original with character art. Looking forward to a continuation!
vezanmatics responds:
you missed the point.
what we think are aliens are simply time-traveling futuristic humans from a million years from now.
simple.
that is why they're all this uniform race of short gray people with big heads and scrawny physiques.
Looks great!
The animation in this just looks so freaking cool and I like the premise/plot of it as well. It is just so sweet to see those big shots of the city overhead. I like the idea of humans going to other planets in the feature and then becoming like the aliens they meet on the planets. There was also a nice sense of humor to this. It took me awhile to understand what was going on with the "Play" button in the beginning. I can understand why it won Review Crew Pick and why it has such a high score!
Looks interesting.
I really enjoyed that. What first caught me would've been the humour. Then, the really plot surrounding the world you conceived.
The visuals were really great, but they seemed a little bit choppy at points (like when panning across the city).
I really hope you do continue with this. It looks like it has some potential for being really interesting.
This is a interesting story. Especially, that the grays are human in the future. I looked at some of the other episodes and they are engaging and keep you interested.
I do feel there is some question that you may plan to answer. Like what happened to earth? Is it around or was it destroyed.
One question I have is this, and that is where the story does fall short for me, why does the government need a desperate alien, sorry Human, for this mission? You would think they would have a long line for the fist time traveler. That seems like one thing in the story to clarify. Is it that the far in the future human are not as much a risk takers as the their homosapains ancestors, they are not fixated on getting laid as the older humans were. When we blasted men in to space or to the moon even working towards Mars we had people lined up because despite the great risk and hardship of the trip its worth the prestige of being the FIRST. And if they are just testing would they fist send a probe? And if they need a test subject would they send a dog or a homosapain on a short trip to see if it does damages? I humored my self with the idea that if the protagonist turned his master down his master would say sorry but you know to much and you should have figured that when stepping in this room you enlisted your self and have no choice but fallow my orders. But is there any test pilots they have up front, people that are not underage and already skilled on operating advance vessels. These test pilot can be hand picked from the government without them noticing until they are selected and given orders. OK so he is very smart and it would not surprise me that everyone of those humans are with an average IQ of 250 but still it does make me wonder what there idea of a candidate is.
Well it may be looking too much into it as it is also a comic story. It does have the Dr Who or Travelers guide though the galaxy feel to it. And I still think it is a great animation and story. It is still a fun story to watch and I am looking forward to you new episode.
vezanmatics responds:
i never even considered any of those things... i guess the idea here is that Scientist Trox is kind of a backwater scientist himself, and is probably privately funded. There's also been a couple of hints dropped here and there that he may be less-than-honest.