Meh...
Ill give you a two because it's a good movie for a start, and is better than anything I could do. However, you should have definitly put more practice into this before making it, especially with such talented voice actors.
Reviews for "Cooking (bocodamondo)"
bocodamondo responds:
iam new this is just my fourth flash!!!!
Decent,
I dont care if God voices for your movie. Its about a mixture of sound, animation quality, and the story.
The sounds are not all on cue. Could use some balancing and better mixing. Also the english is really bad from the majority of the actors. The ending was awful to listen to (The wretching sounds).
Animations are subpar to the Newgrounds standard of high quality animations. But it certainly isnt awful. The animations of people interacting hand in hand is not very good either. I think some emphasis on making the animations more blended and less 'blocky' would be a good effort.
Story has a fairly good beginning, middle, and end for a Flash. I see no problems with it
Certainly isnt a masterpiece, but the quality shows. This wasn't done overnight, nor was it a 30 second short, this was a decently long. Though i would not call it a 'funny' story.
The most emphasis you need is better sound mixing, MUCH better english (too many typos to count) and definetly some smoother animations.
bocodamondo responds:
ok thanks for info :D im do it,i keep training my english
10 for effort
and for the lulz. work on animation and english
bocodamondo responds:
i know im already working on it, and thanks :D
well...
you still got a lot of work,so keep going!
bocodamondo responds:
thanks
ugh...
Sorry but the jokes suck alot and you can animate decently or draw good.You can't even voice act decently, only some other flash authors did it great.Soory I don't think this is funny at all.
bocodamondo responds:
evryone and with hes felling!.evryone with hes felling...