Good effort, great story, not so good animation
The animation was not THAT bad, but it doesn't transition well (hand/leg/arm/mouth movements are very sudden). I certainly enjoyed the newgrounds references and choices of dramatic music, though some of the songs didn't fit that well or mix into the scenario. It seemed like you only put voice clips and music side by side rather than overlapping. Also, the wtf bomb at the end was VERY unnecessary, wasn't funny or random enough, and kinda killed the ending.
Sure you have godly voice actors at your side and it is probably only for that reason anyone actually cares about this, but that's not enough to call this a masterpiece. it does show that there are some great works out there that aren't being viewed unless these great people point it out or something. I definitely expect improvements later.
Your english isn't too good, but its enough for me to understand what you're saying. You seem determined to learn, so keep working at it. The microphone quality wasn't great either, not sure how to fix that besides purchase a better mic. Perhaps you should ask one of the voice experts about that?
Overall, considering the length of the animation and time spent on it, it was great job. Quality may not be too good, but it was reasonable and enjoyable, especially without all the adult humor floating all over the internet.