great idea...
... but you sill have some issues to take care of.
get yourself a good mic and practice your voiceacting (watch a moviescene you know and record yourself speaking the part of one character of your choice(with your brand new mic ^^). then listen to both, the original and yours. then do it again and try to put the emotion of the original into your voice...).
and let somebody help you with your english. it is ok if it sounds sloppy (might even become part of your style) but there were some parts i hardly understood ^^.
the animation was ok, but it looked like it was made in ms-paint. a little more detail would really spice this up.
all in all: great concept, and i sense a lot of talent (the force tells me so xD). I agree with ermand: do a remake one day, and keep up the work!