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Reviews for "Cooking (bocodamondo)"

just perfect ^^

I always appreciate new artists that get some support from well known folks.
maybe your microphone needs a reconditioning, but there were some laughters in it, like the "upcoming flashback warning"
overall for some improvement i'd reccomend to check the timing again, but i think it wasn't bad.
Nice job... ehrm... i'd write your name but i already forgot it again.
But i hope seeing more from you soon ;)
and next time without ed, ego and moto. I don't think you really need them to become better.

bocodamondo responds:

thanks but in one point you wrong
not i ask ego & tom & jaxxy there ask me to helping
i ask only edd :D
but anywhere i kepp traning my flashes getting better & better watch my first
(no internet) and you see how big the diffrent is

Being new doesn't make it good

Spend some more time on it :/ I'm hoping this is some kind of joke I'm not getting, because this really isn't good.

bocodamondo responds:

well

yawn

No offence but this was stupid. I thought it was gonna be great with Egoraptor and TomaMoto in it but no. The animation wasn't it's best and neither was the sound. I'm sorry to say this stuff.

bocodamondo responds:

WTF,
dont o*you never hear from the word ' NEW GUY"
im not a profi i have only 4 flashes

why you can't understand this !!!!!!!

Ouch

The story was okay, but that's about all it had going for it.
Drawing was horrible, so was the timing and so was your voice acting.

You should either get you and your friends to do all the voices, or have all the voices done by people from the internet. This combination of yourself and well known voice actors just doesn't work.

bocodamondo responds:

yeah but to your info,
IM from morroco that mean all my friends cant talking english good
yes even myself how you can see.
and my internet friends (cartoonzack) has no time and i was just asking edd
(i think you know that edd is cool about helping other guys,i mean he voice a flash from yours too)
and with my luck he say ok and ego/tomo was asking ME for vocing not i ask (lol)
but i know drawing WAS horrible because it was made with mouse :3
and thanks for comment about story

Keyword= Enunciation

Firstly, the audio of every side character was greater than yours. I had trouble understanding you compared to Toma Ego and Edd. Secondly, Artistically you needed to put more work into it. I get you were doing it in a short time frame, but add more frames, finish coloring, etc. While the artstyle can be considered, it only carries as an excuse for so long. Time constraints mean you have to put in the right amount of work primarily, then secondarily, doing the most important things first.