i was going to give you a 4 star tops
but i noticed you used the song Electro-conducter from FL Studio Samples
and thats just sad
the voices where scratchy as where the drawings
and why the fuck is there a 60sec. pause between each sentence?
Reviews for "Cooking (bocodamondo)"
nice
good animation could be a bit inproved, voice recording could also have i small bit of imbroving but otherwise overall rating of 8.
i look forward to viewing future animations by you.
bocodamondo responds:
ok thank you
Not worth the space on the HDD
It's difficult to review this flash simply because the story could have made it interesting, but the presentation was more than bad. The audio, to say the least, is dreadful. It's unbalanced, some sounds drown out other sounds that aren't bad and the dialog was murdered. The animation skips when it shouldn't need to and isn't well synced with the audio.
I've seen people who opened flash for the first time make better projects than this. Please review your help files and good luck on future submissions.
Please. Stop trolling him.
Now The animation was OK, but I've got some points to settle here. STOP TROLLING BOBCODAMONDO BY COMPARING HIM TO THE VOICE ACTORS HE USED!!! I mean seriously, even though Eddsworld, Egoraprtor, ect. etc. may have a lot more expierience in flash than this artist does, that shouldn't make it not OK to start ripping out every bad thing you can find about the flash; while at the same time, comparing it to a someone who has much more experience, because that is just rude, and unfair. Now "why?" You ask, "how did this guy get the help of these voice actors. The answer is, they are all being nice to him. Just like YOU should, (or some other reason that I don't know about :3)
About the animation though, it was great, I think you should clean the graphics a little bit, and make it run a bit faster for that extra point. ;D
its ok
the animation was scrachy but i liked the story