ehh
very good storyline but bad audio and video but hell its better than me.
Reviews for "Cooking (bocodamondo)"
bocodamondo responds:
ok i you are not a faggot because you sad the true :)
Best thing ever!
The art, the comedy and everything was so awesome, so fucking god damned awesome! YOUR ALL FAGGOTS FOR NOT LIKING THIS ARTS! THIS IS THE BEST AND DESERVES A PERMANMENT PLAC ON THE FRONT PAGE OF NEWGROUDZ! My favorite part was when it showed the tv and it said that the coca guy was a jerk and I laughed. 15/10
bocodamondo responds:
well thanks :D
1 for effort and time
Obviously I wouldn't be able to draw better nor animate anything you did, so I won't criticise the artwork much, since you already stated it will improve and you admit yourself it's far from outstanding.
I'll focus on content instead.
First, the reason I stumbled upon this flash is because I saw Edd (from Eddsworld) was in it. Needless to say I was VERY disappointed. This was not funny. at all. none of the situations you showed us provoked a single smile.
The plot itself was rather ... silly, but sadly totally uninteresting.
sound effects were predictable, and sometimes even irritating(ly long). Transitions were slow etc. etc.
Kudos to all the other artists who gave their voice to this, as even if the result is lacking in any real interest, their voice acting was good. Your voice acting however was not good at all. You might want to consider Acting more (live your character) or simply keep asking other people and don't do it yourself.
Still much to learn you have, young padawan.
Ehm.....
I guess you deserve some recognizion for getting all those popular peeps to record voices for you. But I'm sorry to tell the rest was really really bad.
Boring, bad drawn, bad animated, it was overall sucky...
And well, your argument on the author comment......I understand this is your first animation but, c'mon, you're 17. Of course people like Edd Gould weren't as talented when they began as they are now, but Edd was making Eddsworld Zombeh Nation when he was your age....
Anyway, good luck, try putting more dedication on your following projects.
bocodamondo responds:
yeah i know my bad :) my probleme was the time,
Wow! that was craptastic!!!
Ok, The animation was bad but I don't care about that (I suck at animating to). I didn't laugh the whole time, I thought it was boring. I'm giving you a 2 for some how talking egorapter in to voice acting in this.
P.S. how did you get him to do it!?!