its want bad.
it wasnt too bad. but could definetally use some work. one of the voice overs was too close to the mic. and the animation was slow. so i didnt really finish watching it. i couldnt. i understand it must be hard making these video's especially if you are under a time limit. so i say keep doing what your doing and no doubt about it you will get better.
P.S. i do want to see more of your flashes