Awesome
You should thank your cast. I was amazed at first to see such a collection of well known names. The video itself, however, was the problem with me. Jokes were plenty, but predictable, try taking tips from the pros that helped you. They've done comedy, a plenty.
Your voice didn't carry along with the others, who, in fact, were much more louder. Learn one thing: that you are the creator of this movie and your character should be heard more loudly than that of the others, despite their reputations, especially if it's about you.
I appreciate the fact that your doing this in one week, but there's so much more you can do in this time as well.
Besides all that, I laughed occasionally and enjoyed hearing your cast play the roles they played. I was able to understand everything clearly, despite your weak voice and enjoyed it.
Thank you for submitting with such enthusiasm. What all real flash artists need.