Very boring...yawn inducing cartoon.
Your animation is decent, your voices are decent...you have an ok idea. But the movie is just so darn boring. Like nothing happens at all, I thought in your little theme song section at the beginning then something would actually happened. I watched like 5 minutes and I was extremely bored so I just closed it.
This whole thing is something I'd love to pick back up one day, and start completely from scratch. I think I've improved in my writing quite a bit since this time so I hope that I could tell the whole thing with a lot more "umph." Also, this was actually only half of what was originally supposed to be the first episode, and the 2nd part (which I never animated out, sadly) was going to have a lot more action!
it was ok
I think this series has potential but there is a thing or two you can improve. First of all make it more dynamic. I mean the scene when the camera zooms in on the earth, forest, mountains and finally the house was much too long.
Seckondly try using some more sounds thet are not made by your mouth :D
And last but not least try not to play with the camera so much, you probably wanted to test out your skills, but too much camera work is not good for a flash movie.
Well anyways nice job and i hope to see more of this series :D
P.S. Yes i know my spelling sucks
I agree that there was plenty to improve here! And I was really overzealous with my "camera movements" back then. I think I've calmed these down a bit since then, but I still always need to slap myself on the wrist whenever I start touching that camera too much. I think the camera was still a very new animation too to me at this point though, so that might explain why I kept overusing the thing!
Thank you for your thoughts.
You love cheese dicks?
Not a bad flash, dude. Not bad at all. Animation could use some work but overall it was good. Keep it up!
Ah, the South Park references... keep 'em comin'! That's probably one of my biggest influences so a reference will always bring a smile to my face. There is one right now, you just can't see it. I swear I'm not frowning right now.
It wasn't a bad thing
But man, you have to work on your drawing skills. The idea was nice, the animation was kinda smooth, the voice acting wasn't bad, but those low quality drawings ruined everything. And there were some parts without any music at all; fix this next time to make the flash better, ok? You can do some pretty neat work budy, just train more with the pencil before making another movie like this. Good luck.
Art has definitely been one of my weaker areas. Not that writing was good either, but I at least had some practice with that, unlike my art! I've still got some pretty weak art, though I think it's developed into a bit more "watchable" style at this point. (And I think I've improved in a lot of the other areas as well!)
needs a lot of work
his power is kinda stupid.
Yup, that bit needs some work, though I think improved writing can sell it a lot better!