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Reviews for "GunDan Ep. 1"

Not good

You could do so much better. The idea was bad. I don't get it. A boy is playing game cube and then has to leave at 3:00 pm to go across the street and eat cheese sticks.
See what I mean? Your profile says you are 16, yet you cannot spell 'cell phone' (You had 'Cell Fone') Sorry, I didn't like it.

Aqlex responds:

Writing wise, this piece definitely hurts me now. I think the idea is there, it just really needs some proper fleshing out. I do have to say, however, that "Cell Fone" was entirely intentional. Ever read the Scott Pilgrim comics? I'm pretty sure the cell phone in there is labeled with "Samsnug" instead of Samsung. And that was not an accident.