awesome work man!
i can tell you worked really hard on this n put all your effort in.
the 3d effects were pretty good, and the way you put it all together was excellent, although it could have been sliiiightly faster paced, just so theres less pauses in between dialogue and it keeps peoples attention better. maybe some ambient background music every now and then too.
i actually really want to see episode 2 and see how you improve!
cheers
Dayl
Yeeees, faster pacing is something this thing needs hardcore. And music or just improved sound work in general would really help out.
Sadly, episode 2 never happened...
Thanks for the critique, dude!
Good Animation
Very good art/ animation, and an ok story so far, and good music/sfx. Hopefully the next will be even better.
That's what I'd have hoped as well, though I've dropped production of this since then, sadly...
Good start, keep it going
yeah, good animation
hopefully the plot will develop some more but im sure you are working on it
chill with all the camera movements though
=)
Definitely gotta chill out with the camera. I was crazy back then. Though I probably still am now...
Anyway, thanks for the review dude!
Good start
Animation is pretty good, perspective changes are a bitch but you pulled them off quite well, the voice acting isn't great but it's still a good start.
A good start is pretty much all I could hope for at this point! Oh, how new to Flash and editing and sfx I was...
Good(ish)!
It's Pretty good for a first flash series. Although, I'm not that impressed. I think you best one was "Funny School Things". I understand that you were trying to make this more dramatic but, I think you did a better job with "Funny School Things".
If I were the creator of this animation, I would put this video into an editor and correct the colors for dramatic look. well, thats all.
Hmm, dramatic colors are no so much my concern, though some better editing overall could definitely help. And Funny School Things you wanted, so Funny School Things I made! There have been a couple more released since you wrote this comment. I hope you've been well, man!