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Reviews for "GunDan Ep. 1"

Not good

You could do so much better. The idea was bad. I don't get it. A boy is playing game cube and then has to leave at 3:00 pm to go across the street and eat cheese sticks.
See what I mean? Your profile says you are 16, yet you cannot spell 'cell phone' (You had 'Cell Fone') Sorry, I didn't like it.

Aqlex responds:

Writing wise, this piece definitely hurts me now. I think the idea is there, it just really needs some proper fleshing out. I do have to say, however, that "Cell Fone" was entirely intentional. Ever read the Scott Pilgrim comics? I'm pretty sure the cell phone in there is labeled with "Samsnug" instead of Samsung. And that was not an accident.

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Animation wasn't great, not that I could do much better, And the SFX were terrible, seriously 'wushkwaashwooowushhh'? Story line wasn't particularly good either, and the small doses of humour, weren't funny, but thats not to say you should stop making it, just that you need to put more work into your animation, audio and storyline... and your jokes -_-; Keep going

Aqlex responds:

Haha, yeah, I didn't know what I was doing with sound at this point. I think I've really made some major strides in sound since this point, though! And my writing has hopefully picked up a bit too. My humor, though, may not have changed as much. I have an odd sense of that elusive humor thing...

Epic for a first flash!

Everything ran extremely smoothly!

Aqlex responds:

Well, wasn't QUITE my first one, but it was the first of this series! And definitely still one of my earlier pieces. Have you checked out any of my newer work?

HAAA-SOMMMEEEEE

Very good Aqlex :] Keep up the good work Hope to see more epsiodes coming out soon

Aqlex responds:

And sadly, another one never came out... maybe one day though?

Very boring...yawn inducing cartoon.

Your animation is decent, your voices are decent...you have an ok idea. But the movie is just so darn boring. Like nothing happens at all, I thought in your little theme song section at the beginning then something would actually happened. I watched like 5 minutes and I was extremely bored so I just closed it.

Aqlex responds:

This whole thing is something I'd love to pick back up one day, and start completely from scratch. I think I've improved in my writing quite a bit since this time so I hope that I could tell the whole thing with a lot more "umph." Also, this was actually only half of what was originally supposed to be the first episode, and the 2nd part (which I never animated out, sadly) was going to have a lot more action!