I cant think of anything to change
But there are alot of great suggestions here, I just really liked it.
Reviews for "The Paper Prince"
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Awesome. Always good to hear the plain ol' good things too
Deeply... and breathtaking
Very good animation... but the sound quality could be better ( i know that you talked about it in the description, but... a little refreshment never hurted... because you realy can lose points on that). Anyway... everything was great, and is not by a little detail that i'm taking you points... 5/5 & 9/10, but you must promisse me that you will try ( at least ) changing the sound quality!
Good luck for the international film festival, and for you'r future flashes ! :D
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Oh do not worry I will definitely get the best audio quality I can get! I don't know which type (MP3, Wav, etc.) gives the best quality but I chose the type I chose 'cause it kept in sync
Thanks man
I liked it
Things to improve: sound quality. You already talked about it but it is a bit of an issue.
Check the character's height on the first swivel chair bit, I think it changes.
At first I wasn't sure about the sketchy style of the animation, it didn't seem rounded or... comfortable, I suppose the word is. Like you weren't entirely at home with drawing the character. HOWEVER! This had changed by the end of the film, where I thought the style suited the movie well. So I don't know what to suggest there, or if I should even suggest anything at all.
With no speech, I'd suggest that you try playing around with music. Don't go overboard and lose focus on the story, but it's a longstanding trick that when there's no speech, there's music. Even if you don't decide to go with it, it's a direction I think you should let your creativity take you down.
I didn't catch what was with the photo at the end. Maybe pause a little longer, or have the character do a double-take on what finally made him decide to jack it in. After all, it's the culmination of everything the viewer has seen.
Otherwise, I think you're a strong contender, and best of luck!
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Ahhh yes... I wish I could have better sound quality. I'm not too sure which type will give the best quality (MP3? Wav? Idunno) but I've found that it will stay in sync with the type I've chosen.. so for when I send it in I'll make sure to up the quality of the ADCMP or whatever it is.
Height on the swivel chair? I'll look into it..
Aha ok ok that's awesome that you felt the style fit 'cause my friend and I had a discussion about that kind of quality my animation had to it and she said she felt the style worked well but I still didn't trust her. So hearing someone else say that makes me feel better
Music.. music music. Ah... I would have to get help from a friend for music. I'm like.. musically challenged. Heh. But yes. I definitely agree it would liven up the animation.
Alright. The photo seems like it could be easy to change. I think I know what I can do to make it a bit clearer...
Thanks!
Nice, mate!
U deserve 10 cuz the animation was really good!
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Hehe sweet. Thanks. A lot of effort went into the animation..
Beautiful,
in a funny way.
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Very satisfying review.. glad you liked it