I love the message of this flash
That money isn't everything, and that you should always follow your dreams.
Nice work!
Reviews for "The Paper Prince"
Nice
I kinda like how you made the dream sequence look abstract, and made it (mostly) clear that it was meant to be that way. Well done overall, could use a little bit of polishing though.
Tis is good
I really enjoyed watching it, I found the humor delightful and the story even better. But I agree with Fisherdec that the dream sence could've been better, but keep up the great work!
Great work
I thought it was very well done and I don't agree with many of the other comments. I think people are missing the point of the flash. THe only thing that really bothered me was the dream sequence. I really couldn't tell what was going on in some of the scenes because of the scribble style art. I thought that was defi9nitely a great way to convey the dream BUT I feel it could have been done a little better so that the audience can tell what is going on.
nicely done :D!
Nicely done a few suggestions that could improve it for a chance to get a prize or something at a festival would be:
-If possible try to make it with real people this will show that you really worked for it (so many origamis and the scene with all the employee of the month falling in real would be of a really great impression)
-Add a little more speech like "thanks" when people give him work or "hello how you doin there.." for the guy that talks to the lady near the micro wave