Kny
Some moments where good some of the others where annoying and a little silly, i think you shut work on your script i didnt understand most of the story...
And i could hear when you where according the voices
Voices: 6
Music: 8
Story: 4
Animetions where great but i think shut hav choosen your own, the looked a little wonnabe something.
Clicheee
Animation is decent. Seems like a typical anime story or reminds me of an unnamed video game. The voices weren't that bad I thought they were pretty good but the anime faces are a little annoying. Obviously there are good anime stories so this could eventually be good.
But why does there have to be an X after the title. That's like a rip off of Samurai X or something. Why is it always an X why can't it be a Y or a Z or a L or something lol. Always a scar that looks like an X that's so annoying. It's like why can't the person get their butt kicked with only one slash instead of an x slash it doesn't make sense. I want to see an anime where someone doesn't have a scar of an X anywhere on their body. At least Samurai X which is easily one of the best anime's had an awesome story to explain why he had the X scar.
Also, those are like the worst names ever created in the history of names created for anime or anything for that matter. Winzra? Who thought of that name? Why not just call him Winzip. That way he could be useful for opening zip files. And NAvilyn... W. T. F. Really.. I'm sorry but once I heard those 2 names I thought Wow, Really? Do I really want to hear those 2 words over and over again?
I feel bad cause you all put a lot of hard work in this but you should have been able to come up with something better I'm sorry. Maybe it will get better I will still watch and hope to see because at first it seemed like it had potential.
Think of the X as a "mark" as oppose to a "scar". He's not the only one who has it so. The story has been worked on a lot so their is significance to almost everything historically, religiously, etc. As for the names, I personally like the name "Windsor" so like a whole lot of years ago I made one and I kept it. A lot of people don't like it, in fact most don't. But, nonetheless, I happen to like it A LOT regardless of what people been saying, probably the only thing im not going to change (even if I could, could i??? lol) Thanks for the review :3
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the animation was alittle shaky, work on you technique alittle more. Plus... the movie was so short I didn't really get what was going on...
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if you took a year to finish this i suggest that you should get an extra hand in finishing this.
It took about 200 Hours at MOST to do this production :3 So yeah don't worry...
interesting animation, not so good writing
Visually things worked quite well with your work, the effects were good and the character design was well done, with attention to detail. Animation was fluid, the backgrounds were beautifully designed. The music was quite awesome and the voice acting was convincing, albeit a bit low and hard to listen. What really bothered me was the writing. The story and it's presentation were really odd... I still can't understand why use over half an episode, building and presenting a group off characters that is just going to get killed off and not play any part in the story anymore. The whole first part of the group of thieves could have been cut to just a small scene, and more could have been done to develop the actual plot. After 7 whole scenes, all the information we have is what little was shown in the last 2, and that is really not enough... We know nothing of the world, the setting, the people in it, except that they use little crystals for money, and in the end only one character was really presented to us, Navilyn. I believe that perhaps the opposite would have been better, using 2 scenes for the thieves and the other 5 to forward the plot. When it comes to storytelling the time you have to present your story is limited and therefore must be used wisely. Using this time to present characters and situations that have no relationship whatsoever to the main or secondary plots is just a waste of resources, frames and time.
For your next animation you should keep this in mind and focus on what's needed to actually develop your story and to set the characters and the world they're in.