hit and miss i guess
i think the animation was a risky choice but u pulled it off. nevertheless, the lines were pretty cheesey and i disagree with your 'depths of our deepest imaginations' quotelet above kuz its been done many times before. winzra and Equillis, i have to say, were very poor choices but I guess you're trying to be unique
well all in all i can't complain too much kuz it looked like a lot of hard work
7/10 from me home skillet. if another is in store, ill be sure to watch it
Lots of ideas lots of work
An lots of room for improvement.
Sorry if these first words sting - thats not my intention. Prologues usually introduce some information we may otherwise not know in the main storyline. However this gave me no sense of anything really - the bandits who took up half the movie had no real point when the main character shows up halfway through.
So unless this story is one with a focus on mutiple characters and all their stories the focus and much time was wasted during this.
I enjoyed some of the orginality though when it did come about - however as Striker pointed out before I saw some very cliche metaphors as well. Coming up with a whole new world in a story isn't easy as any writer knows. (thats why i couldnt do flashes my series would take ages) So when making your feature movie I suggest you cut the fat off and stick to what works.
Keyword is filler - don't use it. It only serves to bring out questions and split ends to any good story and kills any mainstream idea.
The intro/loading screen was fantastic so when I opened it I thought I was in for a treat but when the animation became rougher I was slighty disappointed. So animation wasn't as consentant as I had hoped.
However it is just in the beginning stages so you could greatly improve on everything so best of luck!
A great start.
Problems:
-Laughable voice acting.
-Constant amount of flapping jaws rids the story's chance of being enduring.
-Zel? Zel?! What a cheesy name for currency!
-Yeah, the voice acting. Has to be fixed.
huh?
the animation was alittle shaky, work on you technique alittle more. Plus... the movie was so short I didn't really get what was going on...
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if you took a year to finish this i suggest that you should get an extra hand in finishing this.
It took about 200 Hours at MOST to do this production :3 So yeah don't worry...