thx
Ahh now I can make a decnt game when i get flash and Flashy sounded like someone with helium
Reviews for "Piggy123s flash tutorial"
piggy123 responds:
it was my voice but in garage band i added helium lol thanks
Action Script!!
All i needed was the action script w00t!
piggy123 responds:
sweet
Another 5 Score.
Once again.
Your idea and what you aimed for was achieved. You had the basics of flash put into this and these little things will really help beginners into the world of flash. But once again, This wasn't flawless.
You could have made this so much better if you, once again, Just put more effort into your drawing and graphics. If you had better looking buttons, backgrounds, and menus, Then your score would have increased by around .3. Which is a huge increase for flash movies and games.
So if you just look into tiny things, and really only an extra few hours work, You can make these works of your so much better!
Also, With flash tutorials these days. They come with normally around 10+ tutorials in the one movie. Especially the Tut Collabs every year or two. So in order to make your tutorials better, You should pack it full with more information and make it more like a one stop shop :)
Your fairly new, So you have potential.
piggy123 responds:
i made this a while back so the drawing suck but thanks anyway
You put some effort into this.
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(Audio)
The introduction was fairly cute, albeit extremely difficult to understand throughout the entire tutorial. Nice idea, though!
Clicking on Flashy? more than once will cause the audio to layer over itself.
( Animation/Visuals/Effects )
The interface could really be polished with a few minutes of work. Borders, transparency manipulation, text effects could all be improved upon.
Making all fonts the same, and the same size would be good- consistency in tutorials is always a good thing. Haphazard red text on black boxes doesn't do much to encourage people to try bigger and better things.
Pretty much, clicking any button in the tutorial pages brings me to another section, and the audio continuously overlaps itself. It's... overwhelming at points.
Also, at many places, there's no button to return to the beginning, leaving the viewer lost.
( Method of Conveyance/What I got from it overall)
Clicking "Move guy with keys" plays the intro again. Clicking the "dressup" box brings me to a round black circle on a white background, with a black rectangle at the top left with the word "END" scribbled by hand in blue. Very poor quality of buttons, but that can always be improved upon! Plenty of tutorials out there.
Overall, I count this as a draft of a tutorial and by no means finished whatsoever. But I do commend you for your effort. I hope to see you improve in the future!
piggy123 responds:
soory the keyframes are messed cause i just added a preloader
Umm...
It wasn't really that helpful. I expected a tutorial where it teaches you what to do not simply gives you text to copy and paste and very little and hard to read instructions.
The speech was a little strange and really hard to understand. Also, there was no music at all, which made it quite boring.
Some buttons didn't work as well, or just took you to something random, which was strange.
Also, the layout definitely needs fixing. A lot of the text is hard to read, it doesn't have any background to it and is quite boring to look at.
It was quite short as well. It just gave some text on moving with the arrow keys and for dress up games, and I remember seeing another flash (forgot its name) where it provides AS code of much more than that.
Nothing else to say... Needs a lot of work on it to make it more user-friendly, attractive and helpful. Plus, this is a tutorial for Action Script, not Flash.
3/10
2/5
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piggy123 responds:
next tutorial is better