Reviews for Piggy123s flash tutorial

[Fro]

I learned nothing here.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Again, very poor design. Looks like it was thrown together really quick with no effort put into it at all. Organization and a good background would make this look so much better.

~ Story/Content ~

This wasn't very good at all in my opinion. When I clicked the top button to go to the move the guy with an arrow all it did was replay the voice of the guy again. When I clicked on the button for the dress up game it loaded the arrow moving thing.

The only useful piece of information was the action script, but because of the way the flash doesn't work very good and the design I wouldn't even trust using the code.

~ Audio ~

Not only can you not understand what the guy is saying, but sometimes if you would click the buttons too fast we would talk even when it went back to the play screen, etc.. The sound was really messed up and you should have used a real voice if you were going to do something with a voice.

~ Overall ~

This needs to be worked on all the way across. The design needs to be so much better, the buttons need to work properly, and the audio needs to be from a real voice actor instead of that weird voice you used.

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piggy123 responds:

sorry i made it a while ago

[idiot-buster]

It was not helpfull

This is just useless. Some of the buttons did not work and if they did they did not yeald to much information. Take for example, the dress up game link lead to a blank circle and nothing more.

Before you make another one, make sure you have all of the buttons working and when you click something thers something to learn in each section and not just a circle or some random actionscript. i really think that you did not put to much effort into this at all and needs to be worked on alot.

Review Request Club

piggy123 responds:

ok thanks i am working on a really big new tut with working buttons and that screen is the end of the movement tutorial

[Soapbubble]

Didn't learn anything at all

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Score: 1 / 10
Summary: Didn't learn anything at all
Review: This must be the least helpful tutorial I've ever seen. Not to be mean or disrespectful or anything, but this left me more confused than I was before I viewed it.

You need to tell the viewer more about what is going on.

There was no graphic, except for some buttons which were hard to distinguish. Some were unclickable. No animation.

Sound was non-existant, except for the annoying voice of "flashy". Luckily that didn't goo on for ever.

The tutorials weren't helpful. They were just plain text pasted into here. It didn't tell me where to put it, what it did, what it meant, what the result would be, nothing. You need to make these like the person yu were talking to knew nothing about actionscripting, oonly then will you be able to make a good tutorial.

Explain, take it step by step instead of throwing all of it out there, organize it, make it look better, more inviting. Delete this whole project, and start over from scratch.

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piggy123 responds:

ok i will

[Coop]

Screenshot collection

Truly poor when it comes to making a tutorial, this needs lots of work - show people what they're after, rather than just a wall of code and show them how to improve their works. If it's a 10-12 step indication of the process required, this is what you need to do. At the end, give them a "How it looks" animation sequence, showing them how to their animation should look.

It needs improved drawing, better looking buttons, rather than just squares made into buttons. Perhaps draw them as 3D buttons with perspective and then animate them actually being pressed. I think that you need to look at additional tutorials to make your own pieces reach a good standard before you try showing other people how to make animations.

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piggy123 responds:

look at the other responses i made this like when i got flash and now i am making a better one

[Insanimation]

Oh dear God!

Art/Animation: 0/10
Badly drawn writing, a few generic drawings and the default font. Can this flash do anything right?

Plot/Concept: 0/10
Well, the layout was kinda confusing, and there really wasn't much content. Half the buttons didn't work either..

Audio/Music: -2/10
Seriously, not good. "Flashy" sounded kinda like Alvin and the Chipmunks on a walkie-talkie to a radio being played through a television with no reception. And that ain't a good thing.\

Overall: 0/10
I would give you negative points if I could, but unfortunately, you'll have to settle for 0. Try again. Much harder.

[Review Request Club]

piggy123 responds:

well this was made quite a while ago