decent
thought it was decent.
Reviews for "Sketched - Last Requests"
sirjeffofshort responds:
Cool, I can respect that. If you have any thoughts on what you liked, didn't like or would like to see more of in the future let me know. Really the best way for us to improve is to listen to what the people have to say about our work, positive or negative, that's one of the many reasons I love NewGrounds so much.
Hesitant at first..
But I actually liked this. Kind of silly story line, but near the end I enjoyed it. Good job, most everyone that tells you one way or the other that this isn't very good can't produce anything slightly as good themselves. keep up the good work.
sirjeffofshort responds:
Thanks for the words of encouragement. I know the feeling of hesitance when viewing new submissions for the first time, but I'm really glad you liked it. Negative reviews in general don't really get me down as I view everything as a learning process and, if done properly, they can sometimes tell you a lot about how to improve your work.
I do recognize many of our productions leave room for improvement, but I like to think that we keep a pretty high standard of quality overall.
Thanks so much for your review and score.
your lips are soft...like a women..lol
aww i wish i seen his wife breakdance that would of been pretty cool.
sirjeffofshort responds:
I know, I think we all have a bit of that sentiment, rest assured if I could have animated it, it would have been AWESOME!
props
nice artwork, you could have done better with the story though, idk, like maybe, ENDED IT!!!!!!!!
sirjeffofshort responds:
Haha. Yeah, that's kinda sketch comedy though, it's not so much about trying to convey a story as it is running with a premise until it looses steam and then trying to end it on a punchy note. Don't get me wrong, I think it is very important to have a well set story with interesting characters you care about in anything you do, but varying from style to style the act structure and begin and end points are relative.
For instance in a romantic comedy a story ends when the love interests get together whereas a drama would likely begin at that point. Another important idea in sketch comedy is to leave things open ended so that you can bring the characters back for more (hinting maybe?)
Don't get me wrong, I understand your frustration and am in no way trying to demean your feelings that the scene ended improperly, I just wanted to put out there where we were coming from.
Thanks so much for your review and positive score.
Lips are so soft.....
That was my favorite joke..... hands down! Great job for you idea and great job to the actors!
sirjeffofshort responds:
As with all of our shorts, the credit lies mostly on the actors. They make or break every scene.
Thanks for the review.