LOL
Wow lol he dos chores for him lol
Reviews for "Sketched - Last Requests"
sirjeffofshort responds:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Awesome, but...
I'm givin' you a 9 because the gun fire sounded like a popcorn machine on the frits and there was some mouth problems on the daughter scene. Very well done. - V65
sirjeffofshort responds:
Don't get me started on the gun fire. Haha. There are some SERIOUSLY bad gunfire SFX out there. The ones I found weren't terrible, but I had to dampen them in order to make all of the dialogue audible (which is the most important thing in these sketches.) so the quality did degrade somewhat.
As for the lip synch... lip synch is the bane of my existence. It is so absolutely tedious that my brain freezes over and I do sometimes slip up. Not making excuses, just being honest.
Thanks so much for the constructive review and the great score.
Hah
Nice work. It was pretty funny but I feel it could have been funnier. I wish it could have been like Merry Sketchmas, one of my favs of all time btw ;)
So yeah, keep it up, and good job to the voice actors!
sirjeffofshort responds:
Yeah, I wanted to use this sketch as an opportunity to work on my animating skills so in this whole short there isn't a single drawing used more than once (aside from back and forth cutaways and the mouths). Because of this it was scripted differently and there was a bit less improvisation but I think it is all in all important to experiment from one short to the next otherwise you end up churning out the exact same thing ten different ways. People may consistently love it, but you never grow as an artist.
I'm really glad you enjoyed this short none the less and we're happy to have you as a returning fan of the Sketched series. Haha. Stick around because next month... let's just say I can't get through the audio alone without cracking up.
8/10
I notice that the dialogue is the main thing here. And you pulled it off nicely :)
I was kinda thinking that the guy was pretending to be dying to make the
other dude do his chores.
sirjeffofshort responds:
Thanks. We are and always will be proud of our dialogue. That would have been a funny twist if he was pretending, but I guess there's always a hundred different directions you can take a scene. Thanks for the review.
Good animation!
Graphics : 8,66
Sound : 9,45
Creativity : 8,99
Fun and entertaining : 9,77
Design : 8,99
note : it was watched and judged by 52 people.All scores above are anarithmetic media(total score of a topic divided by number of people).
sirjeffofshort responds:
Wow! Awesome man, thanks so much for the focus group. How did you get such a concise tally from such a large group? Was it a class or something? If you get a chance PM me and let me know. I would love to get your guys opinions on our other shorts as well. Thanks so much for the review.