Gay
Oh boy! Gee golly! Son, your mom is good and dead...but here, try to fill in your psychological void with her awesome prospects of death in the pilot industry!
-Good Ole' Dad!
Reviews for "Little Aviator"
gay
this is just far to happy and gleeful i just didnt like it but this is a good overall flash i guess
fds
eh the animation was amazing but the story was so cheesy it made me lol in real life, like it sorta came off girly, i think instead of it being his mom, his dad woulda been the better pick to choose as his role model. I mean if you swapped the roles it woulda fit alot better. Also you coulda added alot more to the story for example you coulda deff took advantage of the story i mean its about being a aviator wheres the guns and cool action war scene with shooting planes and explosions eh?
meh
its was good animation and all but the whole aviator thing was pretty crappy but all and all "Bravo"
It tried really hard...
I felt like the entire thing was trying to tug at my heart but it fell flat. The music is was set the mood, and it was find and dandy, even though cliche. The characters didn't really do much. There was no conflict going on in this movie. Yeah the kid wants to be a pilot, that's all? It didn't go anywhere.
The dialogue was pointless, this type of movie would be more successful without any dialogue at all. It came off as too generic and bland. Especially the Dad. Who says merry christmas to their kid like that? I lol'd at that scene.
Work on your drawings. Perspective baby. Keep your character style, but learn some hardcore perspective so you can do the dynamic style you were trying to do.
Also, the ending didn't really conclude anything or do anything at all. It just kinda ended it.
I know how long animations take, and the amount of effort needed, and i saw the effort it's just your final product fell flat. Try again next time. Oh and you like the Iron Giant, this movie screams that you like the Iron Giant.
KartuneHustla responds:
I don't get what you mean by perspective. You really don't explain anything by saying perspective. But I'll work on my perspective. Everything in a movie needs perspective. If there is no perspective, then what the perspective makes this movie.
Like i said before in another response, I tried to make this a musical based project before I started, but the transition of him from inside to outside would be hard without having any dialogue at all. He finishes watching tv, then after that I don't have anything to make him go outside.
The dialogue, well... if you don't like it then you don't like it. Can't do much about that
And yes, there is no conflict. The point of this was to give you small things so you can interpret it for yourself. I guess you didn't get anything out of it, so that's that. Good review though.
-Perspective