Reviews for Little Aviator

[simbrian]

interesting

A few things bugged me though. (by the way pvt-blasto wrote a superb review a few below me)

-no christmas tree
-he wasn't nice to his dad
-I was expecting a scene showing him as a pilot before he has a flashback
-That looked like a bomber... as far as I know there were no female pilots in either of the world wars.
-animation was nice though
-I liked the voices

And that's it. Good work, but the story needs more thought next time. Perhaps even discussion with a few deep-thinkers before you start working on anything.

KartuneHustla responds:

There was a christmas tree
He said thanks dad i love you
it wasnt a bomber, shes just a female aviator and there were female aviators at that time period (few but they were there)

Good little review. And yes, pvt-blasto's review is the best negative review so far. May be negative, but its good nonetheless.

[Octust]

Nice story, voice acting and all

The reason I voted 6 on this is that I think the voice acting of the boy, and his lines to be over the top when it comes to sentimentality.

Maybe the sentimentality needed to be introduced more (or how you say it), anyway it felt phoney to me.

Nice animations though and I give you a 10 for effort, there are enugh comical or violent animations here :)

[minochan]

reluctant review

the animation was fluid and amazing but the voice acting for the little boy was annoyingly overbearing..... ill just put it this way is was so annoying that I could not enjoy the flash.. i mean you could at least find a younger person or someone who sounds like a kid to play the part. Other than that everything was solid.

[JackZor23]

Great but...

That was great indeed. A bit emotional, but that's ok.
However, even tho the animation and story were good, some parts just didn't fit.
Here's a list of awkward stuff :

There was no TV in Nebraska in 1943. Check Wikipedia.

The father seems like he's from the 90s with his colorful tie and his modern appearance. What's up with that. He's totally out of place. Also, he looks like a businessman. He should be like "It's war! We're in trouble.". But no, he's just crafting a plane for his son, even tho he definitly doesn't look like a plane crafter. The plane itself flies particularly well too, dashing thru miles of skies. I guess the father was real good in physics. Then again, it was probably a stylistic choice made by the author, rather than a realistic one.

The little boy was lucky to have one of the few female aviators of the time as a mother. But that's not impossible. So I guess I can't say much about this. However, I don't really understand why his mother's plane is so huge, and how she can find time to bring her son in one of her flight in the middle of WWII.

Ok, so animation was good, voice acting was decent, but it just felt unrealistic to me.

KartuneHustla responds:

Well if I try to correct everything you just said, then you will give up all the opportunities for the sequel. About the tv thing, there were tv's back then and just because it was rural america doesnt mean no one in Nebraska has a television. And telling me to check Wikipedia made me laugh...,lol! Please don't get all of your knowledge from Wiki man. Not everything is true. Back in the forties, people did wear jeans and it wasn't uncommon since it was rural, but to say that tie is to colorful is just ridiculous. That tie is actually a jpg print of a tie that was made in that time period. So again, hearing that made me smile. So the father making planes is actually a backstory that ill explain if i make a sequel. Ill just say this. They used to make model airplanes that later became motor planes that children could play with as we do today, but the planes that were made were only for military purposes. I would explain what his father has to do with the military, but I'll hold my breath for another cartoon. Anyways, the story of his mother is another thing i wont mention. Ill say this though, back then there was a group called the Ninety Niners with a pilot you may know as Amelia Earhart. She was a part of that organization. That's all I'll say for now. Yes, Howard is a lucky male, but there is alot of backstory i havent shown yet. I want you to just watch and talk about the possibilities. So hmm... nothing more I can say. Again, Wikipedia=lawls

PS. Its just a cartoon man. Just enjoy it

[WiiMoat]

Well...

I guess the story is kind of nice, but the only problem is I really don't like the voice acting on Howard. I know that this review is going to get marked useless because I don't like the sound of anime voice acting, but it kills me. Oh, no offense, Deven Mack. Maybe it's just me, but it makes it unwatchable for me.