a VERY well done start
everything was really smooth! great job, keep it up!
Reviews for "The_Weekend"
It'd get you a great mark, but...
...it's kind of ugly to look at. You demonstrate some solid Flash skills, and I'd mark you high as a teacher/assessor, but it lacks the polish of a high-scoring NewGrounds submission.
Lots of potential, and a good start, but you still have a ways to go in refining your art. Things like disappearing text on buildings, cars driving over elements of a background they should be driving under, etc. really take away from what is a solid little narrative.
brokenfridgehinge responds:
Thank you for your feedback, I am still learning flash and all the drawing tools so my next submission should look more polished than this one.
nice
great animation
Hmm pretty good
Yeah, not bad dude. You've got good potential. While there could be some improvements with a few small bits like graphics, it was an overall very good flash. Good variety of techniques too.
Keep up the good work
brokenfridgehinge responds:
Thanks!
Nice flash
The animations were a bit crude, but i loved the car, i just think it was drawn perfectly. Anyways, the beginning was booooring, and too long, so you could've cut it. I gave this a 8/10 and 3/5, because the car was sooo nice :P