Very nice for a first flash!
Nice work, you could improve a bit on the drawings, but it's sure pretty good for a first flash =D
I'm looking forward to more of your work.
Reviews for "The_Weekend"
You need to improve your graphic
The storyline was nice, but the graphic need lots of improvments.
Not bad, but not good either
2/5
brokenfridgehinge responds:
What aspects of the graphics could I improve? I sort of left it to the last week so I didn't have time to do perfect drawings haha. I am pretty happy with it as a first serious attempt, but I would like to know what can be improved for my future works. Thanks for watching :)
Good stuff
I liked this.
The graphics were pretty interesting - the mixture of photography and artwork, although lazy, was pulled off quite well. One tip, though: don't use gradients so liberally. This was most apparent in the opening elevator shot, but there were other gradients scattered about that could have looked better.
Good choice of music, it's probably my favourite track on Better Living Through Chemistry.
boring
no offence but this was boring, and the idea is not original at all...
1/5 for your effort making it
brokenfridgehinge responds:
Thanks! Can I see your first flash creation? Try and come up with an original idea , I'll give you $5.